The Absent Emptiness - Comments

omg SEX! dude you wrote that so beautifal! lol

Nice updates!!! It seems like Tyler and Gwen don't wanna be together, yet at the same time they do.

Might I add also, what a very nicely written sex scene

More soon. :D

God damn it. It's so freakin good.

I read all of this starting yesterday. Very good so far, details and everything. How Tyler's life is at a low point right now, and the emotions of characters.

More soon :D

Wow, that was some deep stuff right there !! JUST PLAIN AMAZING! his dad was mean :grr: i like the bit at the end "Death of the illusion. etc" i can't quoe to save my life so sue me xDD just amazing !

D8

Your poor character...I hope his life doesn't stay so miserable forever...

Amazing.

This is awesome i love this part especially

"They are nothing more than whiny, spoiled, self centered, starbucks chugging, richy rich, yuppies, who want nothing more than the finest things in life"

It's absolutely amazing :)

"It began to rain. It always seems to rain on funerals. Someone once told me, it was God crying. I believe it's a simple factor of moisture and precipitation in the air."

I loved that line. It's so much the opposite of what people usually think. I like how your character can be poetic without being sappy and silly. He doesn't get caught up in the emotion of the funeral and start spewing out deep, dark poetry. He recognizes it for what it is and moves on.

This is probably the most deep-thinking comment I've posted in a long time.

Funerals are definitely not fun. I like the opening lines you had there. Thought-provoking.

Or maybe just cool. X DI updated Quest for Cydonia. Woohoo!

Wow, he really hates funerals doesn't he. jeeze more soon i need to knowwhat going on i've fallen off my seat in suspense. x]
Awesome as always !!

ppl judge a book by it's cover.

I am completely shocked that you don't have more comments/hits/stars on this story. It is just amazing.

Awesome chapter beautifully written as always !!! you never cease to amaze me. Powerful stuff justbeautiful !! :]

*sniffle* I personally like playing the piano...

Another fantastic chapter, as always.Could you read my story Shatter? Your comments are always fantastic and I really want a good opinion on it.

I really love this story, the plot's great and the main character is quite complex...i'm gonna subscribe.
Really well written x

I've only read a couple of chapters but I have to hand it to you, I'm amazed. It's so delicious that I find it hard to let go.

The imagery is wonderful.

I say this with all sincerity - I'm falling in love with your work. I really am.

omg!!! that was so.. sad! *cries* i loved the little poem what he did.

war takes life.
Docotrs in the war give life back
war takes it again

Wow. just wow. that was beautiful you should know that !! i am deeply and emotionally fixed by this story it's just so amazing and refreshingly awesome. You rock <33

Amazing.....it's an actual stroy with a plot and not some fanfic.
I envy your writing talent.