July 24th, 2007 at 04:30pm
oh i forgt to tell you that i like those poems
eyes as opal heart as onyx...or something like that....that was my favorite line
wow you were quick with the next chapter
The Absent Emptiness - Comments
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July 24th, 2007 at 11:30am
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i agree!July 24th, 2007 at 11:28am
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To your main character: GOOGLE IT!!!!
XDJuly 24th, 2007 at 11:22am -
why must you stop there? do you find pleasure in torturing people with cliffhangers like that?
but besides that i really like it no LOVE this story.!
more soonJuly 24th, 2007 at 11:00am -
"She stopped! She actually stopped in her tracks!"
That was actually kind of funny. I pictured a :cheese: face when I read that.July 24th, 2007 at 10:53am -
Well Done.
Once again your writing skills amaze me
Just awesome
You rock xoxJuly 23rd, 2007 at 07:15pm -
oh and i subscribed
cant wait for more
ashelieJuly 23rd, 2007 at 01:32pm -
oh my gosh....i really like ths story....your a very creative person and Echoe is a little...off but i like her name.
this is really good.....i want more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!July 23rd, 2007 at 01:32pm -
Cliffhangers...argh, I hate them.
But I love your story!
By the way, I think your avatar is funny. It counteracts my ninja obsession, but I can respect samurais.
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I just know that ninjas are better. :mrgreen:July 23rd, 2007 at 01:28pm -
There was enough car parts, tires, and other useless junk on the sides of the highway to construct your own transformer from scratch.
That was brilliant. Especially since the Transformers movie is now out.July 23rd, 2007 at 01:15pm -
she's a tragic one..July 21st, 2007 at 05:19pm
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Two updates in one :D !! made my day :D
Echo seemed very nice before but she seems quite underhanded now, it gives her edge at the least :]
Very good :DJuly 21st, 2007 at 04:44pm -
The way you described echo was beautiful, can't wait for the next update i'm sure it will be as amazing as this one :]
Well Done :]July 21st, 2007 at 04:22pm -
Wow, that's just blown me away literally i;m half way down the M5 ,
but seriously your work is just so fresh and crisp, it's like I've fallen in love with reading again. You have alot of potential my friend. ALOT
*subscribes*July 21st, 2007 at 05:19am -
You have a beuatiful way with words you know?
Publishing calls out to you.
wonderful plot, I just hope it does'nt become realityJuly 20th, 2007 at 04:25am -
Still fantastic, as always. You're definitely one of my favorite writers on here.July 20th, 2007 at 04:23am
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Two chapters, and as before, I'm eager to see what happens. I'm in suspense right now.
It's not a great feeling, haha. Awesome update.July 20th, 2007 at 03:22am -
Wow. Im really intrigued. I wanna know whats happening!!!!July 20th, 2007 at 02:30am
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This is a great beginning to what I assume to be a great story. It's a breath of fresh air from the fan fiction, and it's a relief.
I find this story intriguing, so I definitely can't wait for more.July 19th, 2007 at 09:52pm
Amazing work, you just keep pulling stuff out don't ya , your writing abilities are phenomenal
Well Done. x