Remodelling the Wreckage of My Past - Comments

what is he gonna do
WRITE MORE DUDE
i love this
best story ever
xoxoxo

I love how Aiden sometimes reminds a lot of Lyn, other times he is just pure Brian and most of time he really is just a whole other person; completely himself. I love the character you made of him, very much.
I cannot wait to see what happened next. As always, great update. Hope you get to update soon <3

Sorry I didn't comment on the previous update, but I never got the e-mails, so yeah. Good thing you have a link on your signature.

God, her life is so messed up and it's really affecting everyone around affiliated. I was beginning to think that Natalie was really someone perfect, but now the truth is finally revealed! I still can't believe that she decided to change the lyrics to Lyn's song just like that! It's unforgivable! Now that Brian knows how much he affected Lyn's life I hope he comes to realize that he still has feelings for her (hopefully) I hope Aiden's plan works, and I hope it's not something extreme. I'm glad that Brian and Billy are on good term even after everything. But it might not be for long. I really wish Brian and Lyn will once again get together, I know that Billy will be hurt but well he's not 'the one' for Lyn. Love it so far and I can't wait for the next one!

Well, so the girls have finally explained why Nat re-recorded Adeline's song and they didnt know about the change in the lyrics... but I still think it's pretty shit they let her re-record it at all. I still don't think they're completely innocent... they let her do what she likes, so they're just as bad as her.

Wonder what went on in the therapists office, too...

Look forward to more!

cant wait to see what Aiden is planning!

i will be so happy if she joins the band again
i've been waiting for this ever since you said the thing took her place
update again soon pretty pretty plz

Ooh, what is Aiden gonna do? I gots ta know! Haha.

Nat makes me so angry. Seven years and she can't play proper? That's just plain sad!

Loved the update! I'm looking forward to more!

I liked the whole Billy POV. he's important too.
I love it.
And of course it's already ten stars. look at all the people who have fallen in love with adeline.

didn't expect to see a conversation between billy and bri
didn't expect to see lyn talking to anyone so early
cant wait to see where this story is going

Liked seeing Billy's POV. It was nice to get some insight on what is going on through his head. And his conversation with Bri was nice. I loved the update and I'm looking forward to more!

Daym.
She is always stubborn.

Damsel Of Darkness:

I think I'm seeing that wanting Lyn and Brian together is useless... I sense you won't break her and Billy up... which kind of bums me out :(

I totally agree with you! I really want them together!

Billy's point of view was interesting... though it took me a while to figure out who it was. haha.

The talk with Brian was good... told him some stuff he would've never heard from Lyn herself and helped show how Billy feels about stuff.

I think I'm seeing that wanting Lyn and Brian together is useless... I sense you won't break her and Billy up... which kind of bums me out :(

Awesome update, cannot wait for more; as always ^^

I hope you passed the exams :O GOOD LUCK. <3

We can all agree that he does have problems. I do kind of feel bad for him now though. Before he didn't realize he was doing anything wrong, but now that he does, it must really be eating him inside. I loved the chapter! It was awesome. I love how Brian is really close with the twins, even though it hasn't been that long. Can't wait for more!

Aiden got what he deserved. That's that.
I still love this. :)

no i wasnt
i am now
thank god
can't go missing any more chapters
xoxo

I AM A FUCKING IDIOT
DUDE
DID YOU KNOW I WASN'T EVEN SUBSCRIBE TO THIS
well i havent checked
BUT I NEVER EVEN KNEW YOU POSTED CHAPTERS ALREADY
I JUST READ THEM NOW
(i love the banner btw)
OMG I LOVED WHAT LYN DID IN CHAPTER TWO
AIDEN FUCKING DESERVED IT
I WOULDNT FORGIVE HIM UNLESS I SAW HIM BROKEN DOWN ON HIS KNEES SOBBING UNCONTROLLABLY
WANTING TO DIE OF SHAME FOR HOW BAD HE FEELS
BEGGIN FOR FORGIVENESS HAVING SEEN THE WRONG OF HIS WAYS
he doesnt fucking deserve a mother
lyn and billy have been nothing but tolorate and he OMG I WANT TO STRANGLE THAT FUCKER
and the guitar
i want that guitar too
and purple would just be awesome
BUT THAT WAS JUST THE ICING ON THE BLOODY CAKE that aiden is going have to swallow himself
GOD!
ok im done with my rant
but it had to be enough for the three chapter's worth
imma check if i'm subscribed now
I LOVE IT
its awesome
you had me fool with the description too
lol
love ya
xoxo

i'm in love with your story...very well written

Awww Aiden is learning from his mistakes. Cannot wait for more ^^