Remodelling the Wreckage of My Past - Comments

:O at least he is trying! :D

he isn't problemed
he is completely fucked in the head
dear lord
aiden is on my hate list too
great
it gets longer and longer

I really hope seeing a therapist works for him

Aww, well, I'm glad he realises he made a mistake and is trying to get help to fix it. He's trying...

I hope things work out for them. They need to re-group as a family again. :)

Aww, he's gonna try to get help! Maybe there's hope for this boy yet!

Loved the update and I'm looking forward to more!

sorry for not commenting sooner
i went to kings island
the whole thing with aiden has made her completely snap
i mean i saw the breakdown coming i just didnt think it would be this big

She wasn't too harsh at all! I think she's doing exactly what needs to be done. That's what he wanted after all. I think she's just doing it so he realized his mistakes and begs for her to come back in his life. For a second, in the summary, I thought you had actually killed her! I was about to flip! But then I thought that there couldn't be a story without Lyn in it.

I'm glad Aiden is rethinking things and realizes what he had done and that he needs to change. I'm sure that he knew the gun wasn't loaded, but to do such a thing and at his own mother too!

I do think that inside it was killing her to say those cold words to her son, but she knew it was the right thing to do. I wonder why Brian was standing there like an idiot, not doing anything. I want him to be concerned about her and to want her back! I really do, but I guess things don't always turn out the way people want them to.

I think this story will be about Adeline discovering herself once more and coming back stronger than beofre. It would be really cool if she goes solo or forms another band. I think that she expresses herself best in her music and lyrics.

I do hope however that she returns, and I'm sure she will. Most of all I hope that Aiden and Brian will be the ones to hunt her down and make her come back since they are the ones that most contributed to why she left. I mean yeah, Nat's taking her place and all, but if she wasn't with Brian it wouldn't have been so bad for Lyn.

I really love it so far! I'm glad I found an Internet connection in one of the visitor centers! The banners are awesome!

Aww man. She's leaving everyone.

and also cant nathalie just go away man shes trying to be her and its buging the crap out of me haha i feel so bad for the girls cause shes leavn them and all cant wait to see how people take that.

what no way was she harsh to adien he deserved everything she said and more he tried to kill hes fuckn mom man that just sucks balls.

HeII Gates (11:15:27 PM): He remembered when his mother used to sang this song to him, lulling him to sleep with ‘When I Come Around’.

Aiden realized that all his childhood had been lulled with Green Day.
HeII Gates (11:15:43 PM): LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I JUST LOVE HER GREEN DAY MENTIONING IN THE MOST DRAMATIC MOMENTS XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Katie A7X (11:15:46 PM): AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Katie A7X (11:15:48 PM): <33333333333333
HeII Gates (11:16:08 PM): I WANT TO BE LULLED WITH GREEN DAY! XD
Katie A7X (11:16:53 PM): ME TOOO! O__O

Amazing chapter, I cannot wait for more seriously this is so damn good, you're an amazing writter! Looking forward to see what happens and how! :mrgreen:

She's abandoning her daughters. Yea they're with their dad's but that doesnt mean she gets to run away from them when things dont go right.
I hope Aiden does change, although it seems like Lyn wont forgive him anyways.
I think she was right in stating she's not made to be a mom...she's not but since she is one, she needs to step up and take responsibility for them instead of leaving...again.
Anyways, cant wait to see what's gonna happen next

^ I concur.

Hmph. id like to see Aidan change, but i doubt it.

Wow, running away from the girls too? I could kinda understand Aiden, but Angelina and Celia too? But I guess I can understand that. It makes sense that she'd want to leave Huntington for a while, she's had to deal with so much.

Loved the update and I'm looking forward to more!

o.O

Man, the girl really likes to run away... doesn't she? hahaha.

I get her needing to be away from Aiden... but her issues with him shouldn't keep her away from the girls. They shouldn't be punished of not having their mother for something their brother did... Just a thought.

Having said that, I understand her decision to get away for a while. She's had to deal with a lot since coming back to H.B and it's no wonder she's finally become overwhelmed... it was bound to happen.

I still want Nathalie to just go away. I get that she's not as bad as we may have first thought... but I still don't want her there. haha. I still hope for a reconcilliation between Adeline and Brian.

i am so glad you updated i was so excited to read this

ouch but i think aiden deserved it

go adeline!!!

Wow this is so good that I'm actually crying, and smiling. I was sure she was alive, then I read the preview and was like happy she's dead, now reading the chapter she's alive so you've officially confused me. In an awesome way. You do that great.
I fucking love it, it's amazing you are such a great writer, I love your way of showing your ideas, your amazing ideas and the fact that it really is more than a story; it is the life of Adeline. And I admire the way you write about her life. You're such a great writer seriously.

Good luck at your exam, I'm sure you'll do great ^^ Don't feel bad for not updating but if you have time you definitely should update soon; I cannot wait for more.