This, Is Getting Over You - Comments

  • zomg i love diss.more x]
    December 12th, 2007 at 11:58am
  • There's an update on it's way. It was delayed a bit since my exams- then I've just been lazy and made Die wait on me. :shifty

    We haven't forgot.
    December 9th, 2007 at 12:48pm
  • Y'know, I just thought of this story randomly today. And I was wondering when you were going to update it again. I still wanna know what Del's going to do about thisssss (:

    :tehe: I'm going to re-read it, just because I feel like it. Yaaaaaaay! ^_^
    December 9th, 2007 at 09:12am
  • Thanks for the comment!

    Del has developed a lot through the story and has turned into a person who carries a lot of different aspects from both our personalities, and I've come to realise that Del is very alike a real person and I think both Die and I have an equal understanding about her.

    We both hate changing the POV too.

    And the update. Well, I've been doing a lot oh homework as I finish school in a week, and it's my turn to be writing. I will plan to find time this week.

    Thanks again for all the comments guys!
    November 7th, 2007 at 12:39am
  • Swoon
    That was me yesterday.
    I was all OMG.
    I really liked the story.

    Honestly, at first I thought it was one of those omg-my-band-played-at-warped-and-i-fell-in-love-with-gerard-way-and-there-was-some-drama-but-we-realized-we-were-made-for-eachother stories. But there was something that kept me reading and reading, even though I was supposed to prepare for an oral. I can't tell what it was, 'cause there are so many good sides to this story.
    I don't think I've ever read a more dynamic story. Just when I think it's all gonna sunshine and rainbows, everything goes downhill again. I LOVE THAT :cheese:
    The twists you come up with are just...too entertaining! And they keep shocking me; like I've already said, they happen when I don't really expect them.
    What I also feel the need to praise are the descriptions of emotional states the characters are in, or more precisely Del's and also Gerard's state of mind. It's almost incredible how detailed their personalities are, considering there are two authors. Amazing :cheese:
    I also like how it's all from Del's POV. Not switching POVs was a VERY good idea. This way we get to know her better. No matter the explanations, what says the most about the characters are their actions. And you're good at describing both very good, even though you're supposed to be subjective.
    Oh, and the lyrics are ::love: I'm amazed at how good you've weaved them into the plot. Just perfect In Love
    I'll stop ranting now.
    It's just that even though I'd read it yesterday, I'm still under the impression.
    GREAT JOB Thumb up

    So, have you considered updating soon?
    November 6th, 2007 at 09:58pm
  • very very very good chapter
    i want another update >:]
    November 3rd, 2007 at 11:48pm
  • OH MY GOD!! WHY CAN'T THEY JUST ADMIT THAT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER ALREADY!!!
    UGH IT'S AGONISING!!!! LOL IT WAS GREAT THOUGH I JUST REALLY HOPE THAT SOON THEY WON'T BE ABLE TO SAY NO TO EACH OTHER!!
    GREAT CHAPTER GIRLS!
    October 31st, 2007 at 06:35am
  • yes! this is getting better and better by each chapter!
    i love it!
    October 31st, 2007 at 01:40am
  • Ok_Davey:
    Grrr, they're both jerks. I want them to just get along so badly, but then again there would be no drama.
    The music references are wonderful as usual.
    The only thing that bugs me is that she was too clear while being drunk. It just doesn't seem realistic enough for me.

    More soon please!
    I kinda don't want to get into describing what it feels like to be drunk, I don't think there is a way to describe it unless your the character and I didn't want my personality to over crowd her personality.

    But I guess I could try next time, something for me to think about in more detail. :think:

    Thanks for the comments guys.
    October 30th, 2007 at 02:22pm
  • Grrr, they're both jerks. I want them to just get along so badly, but then again there would be no drama.
    The music references are wonderful as usual.
    The only thing that bugs me is that she was too clear while being drunk. It just doesn't seem realistic enough for me.

    More soon please!
    October 30th, 2007 at 12:02pm
  • You feel washed up like piss gone down the drain
    Nice Green Day reference :]

    Anyway, I've finally caught up. AND I am so freakin' excited. I love how in depth Del's character is. Also, what I noticed was different is that you make Del have little arguements with herself which is something I just thought was really original and something new that I haven't read here on mibba. Thought that little tibet was pretty wicked.
    I also like how you've made Del grow more as a person. In most stories that I've read here that doesn't happen. They all fall for a band member or don't grow up in some way..they remain the same. However, with this story I absolutely love how Del, towards the end, is out to get somewhat of a revenge. I love it!
    I can't wait till you guys update, I love reading this story. It gets more interesting every single chapter. Keep it up guys!
    October 30th, 2007 at 06:49am
  • Awesome update!!! Clap
    i haven't been on in forever.....:shock:
    October 30th, 2007 at 06:44am
  • Awesome update!!!
    Cant wait for more!!!
    October 29th, 2007 at 06:31pm
  • JDJSAK:JDSKALNRSKA:
    This story is freaking amazing.
    No kidding, it's awesome, && you should update it more often =]]
    More
    <33
    October 29th, 2007 at 03:06pm
  • *hearts jumps out of chest* In Love Alexa- your comment made me go all :cheese: because I was so excited to read it! Thaaaaaank you!

    xo paper hearts- Shifty we tricked you. :tehe: Thank you!!!!111111
    October 29th, 2007 at 12:02pm
  • wow
    That was great
    At first a thought Frankie really like her but then I read it and saw that he was trying to help her play Gerard's game.
    I was happy that she was happy again, but then she got sad again. Stupid guys with there mind games, I'm glad she's playing back a little.
    Anyway, that was a phenomenal update!
    October 29th, 2007 at 09:25am
  • (: Just to let you know, you've made my entire crappy weekend by updating this story.

    “I knew if I-” he started stuttering again. “I knew if I kissed you he would see it and he’ll get jealous and he won’t ignore you!” The words spilled from his lips as if he was just like a five year old who couldn’t keep a secret.

    Loved that part, I could really imagine Frank as a little kid! I was smiling widely when I read that.

    I was drunk and depressed, and I was only pretending to be happy.

    I practically teared up when I read that. I dunno, it was just... like yeah.

    "Just fucking come back to me!" I screamed as the agony of the tears ripped into me, that cry where no matter what you do you can't stop it, there's just this yelping pain coming from your chest making it hard to breathe.

    Teared up more when I read that, it's happened to me a lot and I loved how you just described it perfectly.

    I'll give him the best game he'll never want to play.

    Loooooved that, I was practically all over it because I was like, "Yesssss Del, revenge!" Cheering inside my head and such.

    I really loved this chapter, it was like, finally she's letting him know how she feels! Like, honestly Gerard, if you really liked her just... rgh! I'm kinda mad at him right now. Nah, I am mad.
    October 29th, 2007 at 07:28am
  • God, this can't be good..*shakes head sadly*
    I love this story!
    Update soon.
    =)
    October 29th, 2007 at 03:27am
  • THAAAAANKSSSS!!!!11111 That comment made me happy. :D

    I was listening to 'I miss you' by blink while writing it at 5 am, so I was writing with full emotions. :lol: Sry for the typos. Sorry I'm not some kind of story editor. :file:

    o wait...
    October 29th, 2007 at 01:52am
  • poor del she and gee really hate each other
    October 29th, 2007 at 01:51am