Our Hearts Begin to Crumble. - Comments

Ahhh, now that I know who Mia is I really like her. Therefore I feel bad for her. :[
And Kennedy is just pissing me off. He needs to quit being so rude towards Molly.

This is absolutely amazing and I'm just waiting for more drama to unfold.

I loved this chapter. (:

Well THAT just tells me what happens Hemorrage. And I'm gladly okay with that(;

Eeeep. I love hysterical Molly.

I may have forgot to mention this but I love 1997 so much.
It makes me way happy that you use 1997 lyrics as titles.
And yey for trading updates. Loved this one because of Molly's crazy rambling.

I. am. so. confused.
Ill edit this later with something rational when I understand

And there was the connection I was looking for, haha! But seriously, this is amazing. There is the odd typo here and there, but your writing is just... enviable. Really.

So, Molly and Kennedy were such a cute couple, but it's nice to see characters branch out a little and change (hopefully for the better). I loved the fight scene in the last chapter, Kennedy had me chuckling towards the end. So, yeah... loving it!

this is so good(:
can't wait for moree.

Oh my God. I can't believe you connected them. I got it as soon as she said "anorexic" and I popped over to Hemorrhage and scanned the first few lines, and then I saw Mia's name, and oh my God.
Have I told you that you're amazing? Have I? Because You are.

EDIT: I went through all of that and didn't even tell you how much I love Molly and Kennedy.
And how much I love that Kennedy has changed a little. :D

I was confused at first when I read Molly in the first sentence, but I put two and two together to figure out it was John and Mia.
I can't believe he broke up with her! What is is madness?!
The drama's kicking in and i'm loving every second of it (:
Totally did not expect for her to speak to Kennedy or see Kennedy at all.
The mini-fight between them got heated and it was like one of them was going to burst or something. Especially Molly whose freaking out about the whole situation.
And she definitely started talking about her relationship with Kennedy, even if she doesn't want to admit it. It's hard, especially when Kennedy hasn't been so suave and manned up.
Shocked to see him call her out though the way he did so maybe he's grown up a little.
Have no clue what to expect next and I'm loving the element of surprise and mystery (:
Love you, girlie and yeah, update soon of course. ;]
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I love the chapter title :mrgreen:. Totally poetic :cute:. Anyhoo, this chapter was awesome and that ramble Molly did probably has to be the best lines- so far -that I totally love. And I laughed too, for some reason throughout it. And Kenny calling her out, I was kinda not expecting.

What happened to the text she sent him? Why didn't he mention anything about that and if he really loved her, he should've just kept his mouth shut about Jon's and Mia's relationship and declare his undying love for her :grr:. But that's just something I'm hoping will happen, :tehe:

I felt like Kennedy for a second when I was reading like "Wha?" lol but I loved the update and am extremly excited to read more :D

i loveee this update.
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Whoa, I was right.
And stupid Molly needs to be with stupid Kennedy already!!

I totally forgot about this! Then, today, I was scrolling through my subscriptions and I was like, 'I miss Molly' and remembered you did a sequel! I subscribed and next time there's a update, expect a less rushed comment, :D.

amazing start :D im so stoked for the next chap! update please?

Now, I can see already this is going to be as good as what came before.
I'm really looking forward to where you're taking this, since Molly's changed and she's not giving in to Kennedy easily, it complicates matters, but at least it's not one of those cliche, obvious stories you know the ending before it's begun. So yess, I've enjoyed the first three parts, and I'm looking forward to what's coming.
And you write beautifully, with just enough description.

allison wonderland:

As long as she doesn't get together with Garrett

AAAAAH, I do not agree with this statement.

but anyway, you know my opinion on that unless I didn't enforce it enough. (Wouldn't want to annoy ya) BUT
Garrett and I had been close before, yeah. I mean, he punched Kennedy on a variety of occasions. <--- That made me smile big, big, big like the idiot that I am yet, really likes this story.

i love love this update (:
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It makes me happy when you update!
Garrett is such a sweetie!