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  • fingers.

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    "I glanced at Demetri but he was looking straight ahead, probably trying not to cry… or something. "

    that line cracked me up because i couls picture it all so clearly haha i have felt that same terror- the ppathetic fear of the good-two-shoes-lame-person who somehow finds themselves in the principal's office.

    actually it was kind of freaky how close that principal was to my old one from highschool. he always talked in a really soft voice which, i'm sure he thought was calming, but really just made him seem like paedo.
    life is cruel.
    September 21st, 2009 at 02:25am
  • kaleidoscope.

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    Oh, god.

    Her Oma is hilarious. I love her.

    My favorite quote is:

    "Das ist das lächerlichste Stück der Scheiße[1]-- excuse me, is that the principal's office?"

    Since, I understood the German. lol
    September 20th, 2009 at 07:30am
  • lazydancer

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    Sorry it took me so long to comment.

    I love Oma! She's awesome. :D
    I can't remember my favorite what quote was, but I'm pretty sure it was something she said, or Bobbie said. (haha, I almost wrote Boobie, Lol).

    Amazing update. :]

    PS: Congrats about you and Sophie! XD
    September 20th, 2009 at 07:24am
  • MassRomantic

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    What a fantabulous update (I want an Oma).
    And what a fantabulous way to announce our engagement!
    September 20th, 2009 at 03:02am
  • jennab72

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    ahaha! this is the funniest thing i've ever read on mibba!
    keep up the good work, chief :)
    September 20th, 2009 at 02:42am
  • kaleidoscope.

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

    That was utterly hilarious. Ron is one
    mother friggin' psycho. I mean, who attacks
    people?
    September 11th, 2009 at 07:25am
  • FRAGILEWRDS

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    I absolutely LOVE this story!
    Please update soon!!
    September 9th, 2009 at 11:14pm
  • PeaSoup

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    hehehe I made a banner for ron out of my love for him. Anyways photobucket is a poop and wont let me make it any bigger so here it is. Image
    if you cant read the stupidly small font is says "This is Ron, he doesn't know it yet but we're going to get married."
    September 9th, 2009 at 05:41am
  • lazydancer

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    I loved the update. Though I'm sad there was no Shane, but that's okay 'cause I like Demetri too. And I'm gonna try to update one of my stories as a thank you for updating yours. (I trying to give myself an important reason to update, 'cause I'm being lazy as usual.)
    September 9th, 2009 at 04:49am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    This story never ceases to make me laugh. Ginger boy has mental issues in my opinion. o.0
    September 9th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • PeaSoup

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    OMG IF THE PRINCIPLE (notice i spelled it with ple instead of pal cuz i dont consider him to be a friend of mine if he is related to ron lol) FAVORITES RON I WILL BE SO MAD. but omg i love ron. hes a fatty and stole my heart <3
    September 9th, 2009 at 04:14am
  • kaleidoscope.

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    "Oh thank god!" Demetri cried in a very unDemetri-like way, throwing his arms around me and hugging me.
    No way! Demetri hugged Bobbie? The Apocalypse must be coming!

    Haha, just kidding. But, it's kind of surprising, since he isn't playing
    it cool like how he usually does.
    September 2nd, 2009 at 10:21am
  • lazydancer

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    Aw, I'm sorry that you're sick...!
    But I loved that chapter!
    Demetri, Demetri, Demetri. *shakes head*

    I seriously am going to read this whole again, and I've already started too, but I couldn't get past the first chapter 'cause my friend called and whole bunch of other stuff happened, you know life stuff. Bleh.

    Oh and my favorite quote is:
    "I should know, I watch Oprah"
    and pretty much this whole thing:
    ""And she's so stupid about it! She's just all, 'I'm Bear! And even though I've been cheated on twice I think I'm gonna give him another chance!' You know the only reason she actually broke up with him is because I literally forced her to! It's stupid! He's stupid! Bear's stupid!""
    September 2nd, 2009 at 02:04am
  • PeaSoup

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    OMG I LOVE MASSROMANTIC AND UR UPDATE!!

    i just read like lal of her stuff today so now i have like four hours of homework and its ten pm. yay/111
    September 1st, 2009 at 06:49am
  • It'll Be Okayy

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    The only flaw in that plan is that school hallways are usually quite busy during passing periods and if you don't look where you're going, you might just run into a scrawny freshman, back up onto someone leaning against a locker, turn around to apologize, trip on someone's backpack and land on your butt.

    And of course I'm just cool enough to do that.
    Ha Ha

    i couldn't stop laughing! :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao
    September 1st, 2009 at 03:08am
  • PeaSoup

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    omg i just started reading this story and its like amazing!
    my favorite character would have to be... uh I like Shane actually the most
    Least favorite... The guy that keeps calling Bobbie Betty
    Who I want to see more... RON!! he was sooooo funny! lol
    August 30th, 2009 at 09:21pm
  • lazydancer

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    I absolutely loved it!
    Moremoremore!
    August 28th, 2009 at 05:34am
  • lazydancer

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    Okay, I have two favorite quotes one being the same one as yours and this one:
    Ben laughed, "I forgot about that! I wouldn't even call it a giggle, you did this weird, breathy heh thing."

    Fav. Character?
    Hm, I'm kinda liking Ben, but I love Shane too!
    Least Fav?
    I don't know if I have one, 'cause I was going to say Mae, but I feel that she's important, but I guess she can still be my least fav.
    Who do I want to see more of?
    Ron. I don't know why. I just do.

    I love Shane, and this story, and you and your ideas, and wherever you get your ideas from. I love it. :D
    August 23rd, 2009 at 04:25am
  • kaleidoscope.

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    Mibba didn't tell me your updated...twice. D:

    Hahahahahah. This is hilarious.

    1. Who's your favorite character?
    Shane
    2. Who is your least favorite character?
    Mae
    3. Who do you want to see more of?
    Bear

    I'm still cracking up at meanie-asshole. xDD
    August 18th, 2009 at 01:13am
  • rainbow.muffin.

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    (How To Make A Human)
    Please write more!
    Haha, I love your story like I love pie. My favourite character is deffinately Shane :P
    I was really upset before I started reading this and it cheered my right back up again! I LOVE your story :D
    It's hilarious, and your characters are very well crafted!
    August 17th, 2009 at 10:58pm