How to Make a Human - Comments

Okay. So this is scars cousin! I'm on her account...and this is hilarious! I
I would say 1. Shane 2. Ron 3. Ben! Thanx for writing! U rock!

I'm diggin the Pokemon watch Bobbie has too

Oma and Opa are great! I'd love to see Bobbie provoke Ron some more!

This is quite possibly the funniest story I've ever read. (I subscribed, in hopes it will help you gain another star. At some point, anyway...)

my favorite quote of chapter 12 is " but I got the luck of the draw with a kid who didn't know poop from apple sauce." lmao i just love it

Weeeeell.

Your story's awesome. Your an awesome writer. I like your characters. They make me laugh. I wish they were real. I wish that they could be my friends...I wish that you will update soon. >.< Ehehehe...

...I want another amazingly annoying pereson to pop in. You don't have to though... but that would make me insanely happy. :)

Shane is loveable!<3 haha
more soon please?

I had the hardest time reading chapter twelve... The problem was that I couldn't bring myself to stop laughing and every time I did, I'd come across a term like "child-hater" and lose it again. So thanks for the laughs and the awesome story. You're good with titles, by the way, and you have some pretty sweet characters. (They seem well thought-out, and who doesn't love a memorable, fictional personality?) Also, you have an awesome sense of humor.

I never know how to end my comments, so... whatever you're doing, it's working. Keep doing it. lol

God, Shane cracks me up!
Ohhhoho.

If Shane were a real life person, I'd
pounce him. :mrgreen:

But, I like the vibe that Demetri gives off.

I think you're hilarious. Your chapters never
fail to amuse me.

HAHA! Vagina blood.

Ahahahaha.
Oh my goodness! I love Shane too!
Seriously, if you haven't seen the "A Very Potter Musical" you need to, 'cause Shane is still reminding me of the guy that plays Ron Weasley. Plus, it's awesome.

I seriously loved the end of the chapter, and just Shane altogether. Like how he went from asking Bobbie if she was in love with Derek (was that his name?) to talking about how he thinks Dimitri is hot and the he'd so tap that, if he were gay, to the fact that women don't bleed out of their vagina's when they're pregnant.

I found that all hilariously funny, that I don't even have a favorite quote, and you know what funny also, one of my friends, (who's married and 24) is pregnant, so it made the pregnant thing that much more weird and funny, haha.

New Reader!
So ya, this is seriously amazing!
Like, my favorite story at the moment, not joke.
Anyway, more soon, por vavor? (:

Literally laughing outloud at this chapter.
This is exactly how I act on rollarcoasters.
Oh my goodness I love this story.

Shane is just Epic! I love Bobby too. And im not forgetting Demitri, poor him getting his car stolen by Shane. Your story is amazing! keep writing!

gaaaaahhhh shane is so adorable!
anyway great update
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Gah. I love this story so much!
Oh and I kinda do have a favorite quote only because it would be awesome to see someone like Dimitri say this, "Could we be bestest friends forever-est?"
Ahaha. Okay anyway, I love Shane, well just 'cause he's Shane, (have you seen A Very Potter Musical, if you haven't look it up on YouTube, but for some reason, Shane reminds me of the guy that plays Ron in the musical.)

I want you to update like right now, 'cause I've run out of things to say, so I've jumped to the UPDATE NOW stage, in which I beg for another chapter to ease my soul.

:D

I LOVE Bobbie for finally telling Demitri off. That rocked. She's awesome :D

Unexposed Film:

xD I have a feeling Demetri likes her.
Maybbeee?
I dunno.
But I do know I love this:P

I didn't think of that, but now that I do, I realize that I agree.

Anyways...to my own thoughts....Good for Olive/Bobbie. I'm glad she blew up at Demetri. I don't why, but I am.

xD I have a feeling Demetri likes her.
Maybbeee?
I dunno.
But I do know I love this:P

nice update
hmmmm bobbie is starting to be less awkard
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Haaaaaa (that is a sigh of happiness, in case you didn't know). You're stories make me laugh all the time.