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You make a good point Liz, but I think Jamie is a lot cooler than I am ;)

Thanks Leisha-Luna, glad I made you feel better!

I love that Tre poked himself in the eye with his own eyeliner...the bastard!

I also loved the Joey/Billie stuff in this chapter, but it feels totally justified that Tre poked himself in the eye considering he was hurrying so he could get away from the awkwardness between him and Jamie. I hope he pokes himself in the other eye next chapter! :D

P.S. Ellie May, how would your hand ever be steady enough to put his eyeliner on? Just sayin'!

oh yay! Joey is completely adorable, very well done.
And the Tre/Jamie stuff was great too.

=]
Update made my sick sick self feel happy again, I thank you!

Do you know why i love your stories so much?
Because you not only have a great story line; but you also keep them vivid by conversation!
I love that!
Although I STILL think Jamie and Billie should be together... or maybe Billie and Adie?
I was wondering, if you ever considered writing another story like No One Knows?
Because that one's my favourite out of ALL the stories on the whole wide wolrd's internet.

worshipgdboys:

You are an updating angel! Thank god Joey is ok and bringing Billie the comfort he needs. I am just craving this story, even though I have just had a fix, it is never enough, you know?

And you are a fast-reading and commenting angel! I'm actually cheating, because I wrote this stuff a while ago and left it to rot, so I'm just editing and tweaking, then posting, haha. I'm so glad you like it so much though :) xx

You are an updating angel! Thank god Joey is ok and bringing Billie the comfort he needs. I am just craving this story, even though I have just had a fix, it is never enough, you know?

Finally got a chance to use a computer. Anyway, now that I can comment, I love this! It's brilliant! I don't know why you don't have more comments on this..Can't wait for another update!

worshipgdboys:

zildjianrocker:

I forgot to say earlier, that this sounds like a plan. If I could spend my whole life writing and eating skittles, I probably would. ;)

Just give me the nod & I'll book your train fare!

i'm willing to pitch in if it means we get an update faster... shall we have a whip round?

seriously elle, hasn't billie suffered enough? youre a mean lady.
people definitely look more gorgeous after they dump you, bythe way, but noone knows why.

“Yeah... y’know... fast enough that they can’t catch me but not so fast that they totally lose interest.” - had me lolling my arse off.

nice work chickychicken, dont leave us hanging tho - look at me checking for updates on my way to a shift, lol. x

zildjianrocker:

I forgot to say earlier, that this sounds like a plan. If I could spend my whole life writing and eating skittles, I probably would. ;)

Just give me the nod & I'll book your train fare!

worshipgdboys:

Poor Joey, he just wants to get to his Dad and give him a big hug (don't we all?), he'll get there safely wont he? I can't believe how much this story is affecting me, I was having a sleepless night, and random things were popping around in my head, and this story was one of them! Thanks for continuing these updates so swiftly, although I do have a secret desire to lock you up in a room until you finish this. It would be a nice room though, and I would feed you skittles on demand.

I forgot to say earlier, that this sounds like a plan. If I could spend my whole life writing and eating skittles, I probably would. ;)

Thanks guys, I'm SO happy you are enjoying it so much, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy.

Also, I'm loving all your plot theories... basing relationships on rhyme is an interesting way to go, by the way.

I promise I won't leave you all hanging too long. ;) xxxxx

Grrr. I want Tre to stop being an asshole and for Jamie and Billie to get together. Or for Billie and Tre to get together. Or something along those lines.
OR I KNOW....
Tre and Pyro Jay. They should get together because it rhymes. :D

Anywho, Nooooooo Joeeyyyy!!!
Billie should go find him!

Man, I'm really into this story. Keep it coming, it's amazing. ;)

Elle, I just caught up and I can't stand how good this story is!

Honestly, this whole thing with Joey has to bring Tre and Billie together, right? Because Tre can't be insensitive about Billie's kid going missing...and he has to help, right? I hope there's a long embrace between the two in the next chapter...hmm, yummmm! ;)

Feel free to post the rest of the story today. I'm not leaving Mibba until you do! xx

ohhh my god.
you better be kidding with the whole Joey is missing issue.
He better not be kidnapped by some assholes or i'm gonna come over and kick their asses.

Great two chapters, though :)
and i still want billie and jamie together, btw :)

wow good story I hope for more Billie/Jamie action!!!

Poor Joey, he just wants to get to his Dad and give him a big hug (don't we all?), he'll get there safely wont he? I can't believe how much this story is affecting me, I was having a sleepless night, and random things were popping around in my head, and this story was one of them! Thanks for continuing these updates so swiftly, although I do have a secret desire to lock you up in a room until you finish this. It would be a nice room though, and I would feed you skittles on demand.

Eeeeeek! You can't leave it there!!! Haha.
Brilliant as always.
Update soon :)

Hiphopapotamus:

id actually forgotten about my thing for billie joe, in his absence. but i would seriously just take him and his leather jackets any day. the black leather thing is reminding me of that PD song about some hot guy in black leather.... but i cant remember it. you knooooow..

I know I already responded to that novel of yours, but I forgot to say... is this Fem in a Black Leather Jacket you're on about?

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rockangel88:

Alright, I'm starting to go along with the Billie/Tre thing

*high fives*

Theeeeere you go.

Point taken though, he is being a bit of a dick. I hope he gets his act together too ;)

Thanks for commenting!