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Alright, I'm starting to go along with the Billie/Tre thing, but Tre is being an asshole. He better be nicer to Billie and Jamie. It's not their fault he's having second thoughts about the three way relatioship. BTW, Oh poor Joey. I hope he's not kidnapped! And if he was, I hope he isn't murdered. Good job with the update

Holy shit sorry.

shit man.

so im in a net cafe which i think is trying to close and chuck me out, and ive just spent all my bus money on net time and coffee cause i couldnt not read every new chapter you had written. now unless i do some desperate flirting with the staff here im gonna have to walk 5 miles home because there doenst seem to be a cash machine anywhere and its all your fault. although i have just eaten a massive piece of cake that was probably my entire months requirement of calories so walking home might not be a bad thing. ANYWAY i fucking love it, forget the damn teaching and get it published, the lawsuit would be wortrht it.

also, the whole thing is totally even hotter now i actually have a bf called jamie. can you do a special edition where all the shes are changed to hes please? id die. as girls go though, she is probably the hottest one i know. got a feeling thats the end of the threesomes though but dont worry about what people are saying, tre and billie all the way, holy mother of god. and dont make billie cry anymore please, im not sure my heart can take it.

also, is it just me or is jay the pyro actually rather sexy (for a totally fictional character, i mean)? anyone? im sensing some tension there, like the wise lady on the other page mentioned. i totally see him as some cool lazy californian dude who hangs out on the beach wearing ripped jeans and listening to sublime or grateful dead or something..

anyway, i just have no problem believing tre and billie joe are exactly like you write them in real life. i still think youve been secretly having sex with them this whole time and that this story is actually autobiographical, its the only explanation for the realism. while im on that, i hadnt seen all the kissing and touching pictures of bj and tre til i came on here, hot damn. they cant even hide it anymore. id actually forgotten about my thing for billie joe, in his absence. but i would seriously just take him and his leather jackets any day. the black leather thing is reminding me of that PD song about some hot guy in black leather.... but i cant remember it. you knooooow..

right, id better go cause im like an hour late already and MY jamie might have already called emergency services, you know what hes like bless his heart. anyway i just love it and you and the fact that tre and billie are so blatently fucking in real life that its just getting silly.

now call in sick to work and get back to writing. sorry i havent called in ages, im completely rubbish and off the radar, dont take it personally.
jon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxo

p.s. i used to have an account on lj can u remember what i was called??!
p.p.s before i forget, remember skippy from rectory terrace? hes making porn films. no joke!

zildjianrocker:

Oh dear. Sorry guys! I can see you are really not coming with me on the Billie and Tre wagon. I'm glad you liked the chapter otherwise though! Thanks for being such awesome commenters!

And worshipsgdboys... I completely agree ;)

I'm freakin' cheering on this Billie/Tre wagon you speak of!

Awww, Tre was mean to Billie.

*slaps him* .... *licks him*

Billie just needs to be patient with Tre even though he was unkind. Tre is just scared and confused...he'll come around to Billie's sexy ways eventually.

Ellie May, I love your Billie and your Tre! Another amazing chapter! xx

Poor Billie.
I feel so sad for him.
Hey- i've never commented on this story before.
I feel sad for me.

Anywho, great story. I freakin love it. Even if it is a bit sad at the mo. *gives billie a hug*
*Steals jasons cards and plays his turn for him*:D

lmao lots of mixed opinions on who you all want to get together - i aint gonna root for anybody, ile enjoy any outcome. Good part as always.

has this officially become a trillie?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo
I still had hope for Jamie and Billie :(

*sniff*imaginary hug* that was beautiful! Yay Tre and Billie!
TRE GODDAMIT YOU KNOW YOU LOVE HIM!

worshipgdboys:

I may be a lone voice, but I stlll vote for the Billie/Tre ending!

Thank God. I was getting worried :(

I may be a lone voice, but I stlll vote for the Billie/Tre ending!

Billie!!! Nooo!!!!
I'll give you hugs!!!

And by the way, nope, we're not coming with you on the Billie / Tre wagon :D
Pleaaase let it be Billie and Jamiiieee! I love her, she's awesome! Tre can have her twin!!!

Oh dear. Sorry guys! I can see you are really not coming with me on the Billie and Tre wagon. I'm glad you liked the chapter otherwise though! Thanks for being such awesome commenters!

And worshipsgdboys... I completely agree ;)

Oh, poor Billie. Imaginary sympathy hugs are heading his way right now, and an imaginary congratulatory hug heading your way too. In my opinion, which counts for absolutley nothing, Tre needs to get his head out of his ass.

Hey I wanted Billie to have feelings for Jamie! Damm...anyway really good update. I really liked it :)

I will not give you imaginary hugs! I'll give you imaginary death glares!!!! I want Billie and Jamie to bo together!!!! Or them all to be together again!! argh! I still love the story =) Favorite on mibba right now.

OK make Billie and Jamie be together and Tre cab find some other chick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I only started reading it yesterday but I want MORE!!

That chapter is seriously one of the bestttt ever.
It made my heart ache.
I feel so bad right now.

Thank you guys, and I'm glad the emotion came over.

There will be more very soon... I tried not to let it get too angsty and / or sappy but think I failed completely... I apologise in advance ;)

Oh my, the emotion in this was really strong, I had a tear myself (gonna blame the damn hormones). The waves of hurt kept rolling from one to the other as they all try to figure out what they want and can hang onto, if anything. Stellar stuff.