Astronaut. - Comments

FeatherGoblinweb.:

And I get some kind of vibe that they live in Texas or something because of the way they talk. Or maybe I'm just imagining it, haha :XD.

I got that feeling as well. Then in my head I automatically played the dialog with an accent as I was reading. Does that seem weird?

Noah is a very nice gentlemen. Although not so polite at first. :cute:

I love your descriptions on everything. It's like what you write in one sentence would take some other inexperienced writer a whole paragraph. It's hard for me to explain but no doubt I am the said inexperienced writer.

I'll be waiting... ... For the next update.

Noah plays the guitar TOO :XD? are you trying to kill me woman? I enjoyed the flashback. I enjoyed the entire chapter actually, haha :mrgreen:. Because I love when you get to know a little more about the characters through the chapters as they blossom. And not just dedicate an entire paragraph to that. And I get some kind of vibe that they live in Texas or something because of the way they talk. Or maybe I'm just imagining it, haha :XD. Lora Joan seems so sweet and I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this. :cute:
The first chapter was wonderfully written.
Subscribing dear. This is gonna be good. :cute:

i just subscribed!
the first chapter was absolutely wonderful;
and i think Jupiter is a very unique name.

and for a moment..
i thought Noah was dead?
guess i was wrong.
i suppose this story has a lot of twists and turns coming up, no?

can't wait to read on.
so please update soon!

<3!!!

Okay, I'm gonna give you another comment then a measly, lame 'I love this' because this story deserves much more then this. But it IS true, the first chapter got me really excited and I can't wait to find out what's happened between Noah and Jupiter.

"She was a sweet old woman who had deemed Jupiter worthy of her never-ending life story." I don't know why I liked this sentence so much, but I did. It seems that around every corner there's always some old lady yapping away :P. Haha, at least where I live.

I loved how you described both Noah and Jupiter because I could already imagine it vividly.

"There were tattoos there; one, it seemed, for every star in the sky. Not a single one of them matched another. There was one of a skull, one of a dancing fire, and one with a heart and a ribbon going around it."

That? That right there was one of the reasons I subscribed. I love a guy with tatoos. Ah, it made me swoon, :yah

Oh, by the way, Jupiter is an awesome name. :weird

Beautiful! Beautiful! Gosh, I'm really glad you're continuing this!
I'm so excited; thank you! :]

:weird. New story... I'm feeling quite nostalgic. =]

I'm intirgued to know why Noah left in the first place and what their relations were. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like this. A lot.

Wow, a really wonderful first chapter. Beautifully written, and very mysterious. Leaves us wanting more! I'm so subscribing!

i love this and it's barely begun :)

xx

I wanted to be the first to comment. I love the story. I also subscribed.

can't wait for the rest of the story. (:

I am so excited for this.
I loved the first chapter...and I am definitely going to keep up with this one.

This story is going to be amazing. I love the descriptive details in there- it helps to give your readers a picture of what the main people will look like early on, instead of six chapters in or something. =D

i am excited for this.
i'm subscribing.

I love this!

This is going to be awesome, I can already tell.

i love this already :D

Ooooh boy. I'm so excited, yes I am.

DUDE. Yes!
I can't wait!!