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  • pieces;

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    i am hooked
    June 18th, 2009 at 05:33pm
  • Derpina.

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    And they stared at each other, preparing in their own ways for the storm they both felt growing between them. Jupiter stood tall on the ladder, one hand clasping the rail and the other dangling like an unused surrender flag at her hip. Noah was swiftly gaining his wit. This was a battle he didn’t want to fight, but had been anticipating since the moment he walked out of their front door.
    That is simply amazing! I don't know how you do it but you do it well. :)
    June 18th, 2009 at 03:09am
  • Flo.

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    Amazing story : ) The way you describe evertyhing makes it feels or looks like a movie before my eyes : D Loves it!
    June 17th, 2009 at 11:14pm
  • Wind In Your Hair.

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    Slower updates? Oh well, really good so far.
    June 17th, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • ladyvader

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    Okay. I'm officially embarassed to say I check this story almost 7-10 times a day. I saw that you had gotten 36 comments and looked at the date. I can't believe it's been 2 days! It feels like an eternity (which it always does on Mibba). Please update soon!
    June 16th, 2009 at 07:23pm
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    AMAZING! Really good :)
    June 15th, 2009 at 05:28pm
  • Derpina.

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    Wow a man of many suprises. =]
    June 15th, 2009 at 04:33am
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    yay!
    i can't wait for all the updates you're going to be making. :D

    <3!

    btw, are the consecutive titles supposed to form one big sentence? (:
    June 15th, 2009 at 03:42am
  • Jalech929

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    Mikabear, I, being a simpleton, have nothing to say.
    But, I luff you, so I comment anyway.
    -----Jared
    June 15th, 2009 at 03:20am
  • Wind In Your Hair.

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    So great. You deserve all of the subscribers you recieve.
    June 15th, 2009 at 02:47am
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    Well to be completely honest...I was plain out worried about Carly leaving this with someone else to write. I didn't think anyone else could write it at all...I have offically been proven wrong. While you're not Carly, I don't believe she could have chosen anyone better for the job, so I thank you, for continuing her legacy in such a briliant and mind blowing way. And for all the people out there who didn't have the priviledge of reading Carly's version...Don't knock Noah just yet. I do believe there's a massive twist coming, and I know for a fact Madeline isn't the person you all think she is...Simply, thank you to Carly (break.my.bones) for beginning such a master piece and thank you to Word!Smith for continuing the said master piece. I love you both.
    June 15th, 2009 at 12:59am
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    Hm. I'm having a small conflict here. Noah sounds like such a sweetheart, and even though he left he still has some feelings for Jupiter. But then again, he plain left her. Got a tattoo to remember another girl. To hate Noah, or not. Hm....
    June 14th, 2009 at 11:31pm
  • SkyLyte

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    I love that you have a quote at the end of the chapter you write.
    June 14th, 2009 at 10:31pm
  • BlueQueen535

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    I seem to be hating Noah currently.
    Dear Noah:
    Jeez! You can't just waltz into a house FOUR years LATER and then sleep with the girl you LEFT! We call that being a man-whore. And the Madeline tattoo? Not. Classy. Jupiter has problems. Some of them YOU caused. Just give her some space. You're making her a weak-willed pansy.
    Love, Me.

    /end rant.

    Okay. I needed to let that out.
    June 14th, 2009 at 05:30pm
  • ladyvader

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    I like the entire chapter a lot (no suprise there :mrgeen:). And I loved how you started off the chapter, setting the scene of everything quite nicely. I feel so bad for Jupiter- my heart ached at the thought that Noah had been with another girl. I understand Jupiter missed him- and still loves him and everything but she shouldn't jump into anything with him too fast. But maybe that's what you're planning and throwing us off for anything to later show in the next chapter that she didn't really jump into bed with him. :tehe:. The plot is unravelling and I can feel the bubbly feeling bouncing around in my stomach- can't wait for the next chapter!
    June 14th, 2009 at 02:00pm
  • emodeerf

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    yay!
    you updated. (:
    hope to see the plot unravelling soon. :D

    <3!!
    June 14th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • horsechic4bibis

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    wow.. this is really good. i love how noah was described.. he sounds beautiful.. *sigh* why can't all guys be that perfect? :) but yes, i am addicted!
    June 14th, 2009 at 01:35am
  • break.my.bones

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    GAH. I am going to be so sad when I go away and I won't be able to read this over and over and over and over again. Cry I'll make a note to go to the library a lot (even though I'll be teased by my friends) just to read this. I'm going to miss sending 84893201470 messages to you everyday talking about this story.
    June 13th, 2009 at 11:16pm
  • BlueQueen535

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    Noah seems like such a sweetheart!
    June 13th, 2009 at 10:27pm
  • sunset boulevard

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    I love the flashback. Helped me understand a lot more. :mrgreen:
    Noah seems quite ~~ :tehe:
    :XD
    Can't wait to see where it goes next. :cute:
    June 13th, 2009 at 03:41pm
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