Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

Yay for dress shopping!! Tee hee = )
Loved it and can't wait for more!!! x

O.O
Missed soooo much!
Only four more chapters? :(
So someone wants her to drop out of the running? .... I have an idea who that could be, but won't say anything. Zacky asked her to be his date!!! Yay!!
More soon please!

Great update! I can't wait to see what happens at prom

Oh my Lord... not one, not two, but THREE new updates?! That makes Miss Kitty Cat all happy in the pants because you know how much I adore this story - even if you just want to get it over and done with. XD

Aw, I totally wasn't expecting a fight to happen between Sarah and Amanda at all. But, lol, that line from Brian about them being her only friends was so douchey haha.

Haha, booyah, Sarah finally stood up to that bitch Laney! Although I was expecting more of a confrontation to take place, but oh well. Maybe that'll happen at the prom?

Yay, Zack finally asked her out! That's so adorable, dude. I love her thought process throughout the entire thing where she was like, 'Sure he jerks off to me...' like so casual and everything haha.

I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

I have trouble understanding why someone would threaten anyone over prom, but I guess some girls really get into it and feel that winning the title is everything. I feel bad for both Sarah and Amanda, because prom is just an event but friendships are so much more. I loved Jimmy's little cameo, it made me smile. Gah, this story just made me so sad, but happy at the same time. Your stories can be heartbreakers Amanda, heh.

I love it! :)

I wish I knew what to say, the chapter update was adorable. The dialogue flowed beautifully, although it made me sad that she stopped talking to Amanda. Most friends would love to tell each other about which guy asked them to go with them, and that actually chipped a piece of my heart off. Zach and Sarah are ridiculously adorable.

Just found your story and I love it!! Can't wait to read more!

loved the update!!

I NEED MORE OF THIS. I don't care about anyone else, but I NEED IT. I love this story. You write so wonderfully, darling.

And I love Jimmy's poster. That brought me so much unadulterated joy. I miss him :/

But basically, I NEED you to FINISH this story. The sexual tension is killing me!!!!

<3

Update soon please please pretty please. I love it.

Did I mention how much I love the stories you write?? :D

Awww, I loved the whole "underdog" speech. It's nice to even think that some kids would support the person who isn't popular, I just loved that part of the chapter to bits. And I agree with Cat on the whole "take a walk" line, that was too funny.

Nyaw it's so nice that she has the support of Stephanie and all those other girls and they're voting for her for being the underdog.

I loved how Amanda was all "Take a walk or something" lmao. And how she finally told Sarah what was happening with Zack jerking off and then talking about it once she realised she already knew. The whole "moaning her name" thing made me lawl.

PS. I think your Word document must have auto-changed the word "funny" to "fully". XD

loved the update!!

Please, update soon!

“{i]Yes, start the campaign. I agree!” - The italics tag there didn't work because you used a squiggly bracket instead of a square bracket. XD

This entire chapter made me go "awwwwww!" because of all the support Sarah's friends are giving her. Espeically Jimmy even though he doesn't know her too well - and his slogan was clearly the best, lmao. He's cracking me up even though he hasn't appeared very much.

And I love that Amanda is still making jokes about Zack. :P

The herpes line totally made me lawl. Because it's so true.

oooh, i liked this update a lot. btw, fav quote:

“Uh…that’s a ‘no’ on the glitter,” Zack said, eyeing Amanda warily.

“But why!?”

“Because, it’s like the herpes of arts and crafts supplies. If it gets in the carpet it’ll never come out,”

i'm still giggling over that hehe. you're amazing

Update ;)

Because, it’s like the herpes of arts and crafts supplies. --- okay, so that line had me cracking up!!

I loved the chapter ducky = ) can't wait for more x