Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awww i loved Jimmy's slogan idea!
    oh Zacky.......
    August 16th, 2011 at 09:00pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Loved it!!
    August 14th, 2011 at 05:53pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Lawl. The teasing was friggin' epic! XD I loved the hard-headed comment at the very beginning, I can totally see you saying things like that. Then when it turned into the baseball innuendos and all that.. it was just brilliant. <3

    I'm also glad the whole "sounds like a teen comedy flick" was brought up and you kind of poked a bit of fun at your own plot in that way. That was really great.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 03:18am
  • Kissing.Sin

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    Ahh bless me and my unknowingness. And yay forzack being a sexy bastard and jerking off ;)
    August 1st, 2011 at 09:02am
  • natorrie16

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    i love this! :D
    August 1st, 2011 at 09:01am
  • HeartFailure

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    Loved it!! Mhm, yes I did. But that's 'cause I love Zacky boy being ruthlessly teased!! x
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:59am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    sad to hear your not very inspired with this story... :/
    but i'm glad you'll keep going!
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:04am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 25: Oh my god...how embarrassing, and not only for Zacky, but for Sarah too since everyone pratically revealed Zacky's dirty laundry!

    Update soon<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:08am
  • xPoppinxChampagnex

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    I'm loving this story.
    Can't wait for the next update!!!
    July 28th, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    AW, YEAH!

    Go get em' Sarah! I love how everyone is on her side over Laney and her stupid cronies. XD

    The line about Zack being unable to get here out of his mind and jerking off over her literally made me burst out laughing. It's so cute.. in a weird sort of way. :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    sooooo glad you updated!
    July 25th, 2011 at 08:05am
  • it's clockwork.

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    teased chapter, i loved it. having a sex dream only to be mentally CB'd by your mom, great move.
    July 11th, 2011 at 04:15pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Lovin' this story!!
    June 27th, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Ahhh I hate, hate, HATE you for that! You're such a friggin' tease, lmao. You know what would have been funnier though? If Zack had woken up with some morning wood and his mum noticed haha. Or if it had've been Brian that came into the room and noticed it, that would have been the best. XD

    I so cannot wait to see what happens next between Zack and Sarah and if they're going to act awkwardly around each other now.
    June 18th, 2011 at 08:08pm
  • Kissing.Sin

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    Oooooh yeaaaah ;)
    June 18th, 2011 at 06:03pm
  • DisneylandAcidTrip;

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    Oh man! I was hoping that they were finally getting it on! Lmao amazing update! :]
    June 18th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    so glad you updated!
    lol oh zacky having naughty dreams!
    loved!
    June 18th, 2011 at 05:21am
  • majoji

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    Hahha, am I the only one who thought it was hot when Zacky was jerking off and thinking about Sarah? God, I'm such a pervert..

    Well, anyways!
    I wanted to tell you that I love the story and I'm subscribing for it, so now I'll be waiting in excitement for the next chapter n.n
    June 17th, 2011 at 01:46pm
  • DisneylandAcidTrip;

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    This story is amazing :)
    June 17th, 2011 at 09:17am
  • Rocket Queen

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    Ahhhh I loved it!

    Especially the part where Zack was jerking off and thinking of Sarah. XD Kind of creepy and cute at the same time.

    I totally can't wait to see what Laney has up her sleeve and is going to do to Sarah. I predict Sarah going all "Carrie" on her ass when that happens. XD
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:04pm