The Studio - Comments

It is effed up and you may hate it, but I adore the end result because, quite frankly, I love anything you spit out. I'm going through the same thing as you, really. It's tough, but you'll get back into it. I know you will. You're too much of an amazing writer to not be able to =)

I can't wait for more, darlin' <33
-Aj

epic fucking chapterrrr.
=D
mucho love!
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I LOVE the story so faar!

brilliant!
god. she should have just...JUMPED him! you know? just full fledged, all out, no holds barred, thrown herself across the room and right AT him and gotten it over with. maybe that's just because it's what i would want to do in that moment, but still! we ALL know it's gonna happen! and they're gonna love it! and each other! why not hop TO it!? but then...i suppose the waiting is like...a build up of everything...hmm...

ILOVEIT!

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"So what? It's like a fine wine--you get better with age. How old is she, anyways?" Matt asked as he and his friend looked over to the table once more, just as Jen caught their gaze.

Heh, that line cracked me up. I have a feeling Matt's going to crack me up a lot in this story. I wonder what happened to Leana as well. I'm really interested in this other girl you keep mentioning... you tease, haha!

Brian asked more than suggested as he cleaned up the plates from diner. - dinner instead of diner?
"Hi. So re you and Brian dating, or is this strictly business?" - are instead of re.
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This was my favourite line: He looked almost like a heartbroken child with a broken toy. - Haha, just because I've seen that look on my brother's face sooo many times when he has to re-string his guitar, lol.

Ooo what? No Leana? Hmm wonder what happened to her.. haha.

Matt? Brian's mentor? Gtfo here. lol. No I totally see that happening, haha. Now I'm even MORE intrigued to know what happened between Brian and this other girl!! TEASE!!! :P

This story is so well written. I'm like a little amazed every time I read an update. I love these little things you add, like the restringing of the guitar, which we all know Brian isn't a huge fan of, haha. Also loved the conversation between Matt and Brian. Great update! :)

Gotta love Matt...even if I don't agree with his long flowing locks at the moment!! Tee hee.
And I agree...Brian is like fine wine =D
Loved the update ducky!! x

haha. i love how you said 'Oooo the plot thickens :P'. niiiice.
and you're right. Matt is one interesting guy. XD
can't wait for September for more updates!
mucho love!
♥

--hEAthER--

Hmm, no Leana?

Great update. I really like where this is going, very original.

Ahhhhhhhhhh Woman! My favourite chapter so far! Wanna know why? Brian and Mattykins! (Uber cougers at their finest =D) I love that Matt is his 'mentor'. That's pretty awesome! So, I wonder. Is Jen gonna get close with anyone in the band!? She'll need a friend! Why not Val? (Yes, I count her to be part of the band lol) I'm sooo very excited for the next chapter, sug, you've got no idea. I loved the bar scene and I really hope it's continued =)
<333

Oh that's just fuckin PERFECT. hahaha

Absolutely adorable. =D

Loved it
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CAN THEY PLEASE HAVE SEX ALREADY?!

Rocket Queen:

"Me? Silly? Never..." Brian announced as she stepped out onto the deck. -- He instead of she?
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I'm loving the relationship between Brian and Camilla more and more. They're so cute together! I loved the part where she was hanging onto his neck and he was pulling her around the pool - reminded me of the same thing my dad used to do with me when we went swimming. Good times. ^^

Heh, that was one of my favourite parts too. Honestly, this father-daughter relationship couldn't get any cuter.

"Me? Silly? Never..." Brian announced as she stepped out onto the deck. -- He instead of she?
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I'm loving the relationship between Brian and Camilla more and more. They're so cute together! I loved the part where she was hanging onto his neck and he was pulling her around the pool - reminded me of the same thing my dad used to do with me when we went swimming. Good times. ^^

He knew there was nothing she would ever see in him besides a boss, and maybe a friend.

Yeah, I wouldn't be so sure about that...

"I think I'm going to throw you," Brian said thoughtfully, inching towards Camilla.

How adorable is that?! :D Camilla is so cute and Brian is beyond cute with her. And seeing Jen with his kid is only making her more attractive. Not that I think any of them minds...

I think this story is one of my favorites at the moment. I get ridiculously happy every time I see that you've updated. :)

I love this story so much. It's really awesome. :]
I really like Brian and Jens relationshio, haha, can't wait for it to grow into something more. :]]]