The Studio - Comments

Awwww...I swear I adore that little girl more and more with each chapter she's in!!
And I think I fall a little more in love with Brian each time too =P especially at the thought of him in a swimming pool. Tee hee.
I love this story ducky!! It truly is awesomeness on a page =D x

im Loveing this last chapter. awesome. i cant wait for more!! :D and ( WOOHOO GO FLORIDA XD )

such a good chapter!
i'm totally getting hooked on this story. :D
mucho love!
♥

--hEather--

Update this please. Thank you <3

After reading this chapter I have to say, AWWWWWW! Cutest chapter I've read so far - I love the relationship between Brian and Camilla. I think father-daughter relationships are just so amazing; it makes me smile to see it or even read about it.

And I think I've said this before, but I really like how Brian and Michelle are still friendly with each other. Same situation is happening right now with my brother and his ex-wife, for the sake of their kid. So I'd say it's definitely realistic in the way you're portraying it.

I also can't wait to hear more about this former "relationship" Brian got into that Michelle hinted at. Haha, sounds interesting.

I couldn't agree more with Cat. It's realistic, the chapter was adorable... and I'm curious about the previous "relationship" too. Loved it!

Woo, love is starting to form
: D

wow. from the first chapter i got addicted to this story, it rocks. so many cliff hangers its almost not fair xD this story isnt like anything i'v read before its awesome. good work =D can't wait for the next update, >=D

They rarely worked two days in a row, and weekends were strictly time off from the studio.

I think those are working hours I could definitely see myself agreeing with. :P

I love that Brian and Michelle are friendly and Camilla sounds adorable! I'm quite interested to find out what exactly they were talking about though, with Brian's previous predicament.

"Yeah.... I think I like Jen, too..."

Aaw, cute!

(Haha, I just realized that my comment is like identical to Cat's.)

freakin' WONDERFUL.
great story.
update soon?
i'll love you forever and ever!!
♥

--hEAthER--

It was good to see Brian working around his schedule to make syre he could spend time with his own. -- I'm sure you can figure out what's misspelled. ;)

"Let me take your bag, sweetheart," he said, holing his hand out for the bag. -- holding instead of holing.

"I promise," Camilla answered, and Michelle placed one last kiss o her daughter's forehead before standing, her hands sliding into her pockets.

And for Brian, that was acceptable. -- I'm guessing this should be unacceptable? Given the tone of the previous sentence.
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After reading this chapter I have to say, AWWWWWW! Cutest chapter I've read so far - I love the relationship between Brian and Camilla. I think father-daughter relationships are just so amazing; it makes me smile to see it or even read about it.

And I think I've said this before, but I really like how Brian and Michelle are still friendly with each other. Same situation is happening right now with my brother and his ex-wife, for the sake of their kid. So I'd say it's definitely realistic in the way you're portraying it.

I also can't wait to hear more about this former "relationship" Brian got into that Michelle hinted at. Haha, sounds interesting. :tehe:

You always end this with SUCH a cliffhanger! Grrrr you're such a tease, girl.

I loved the way it ended with Brian ordering her to get into the recording room. Mmmm, so in control and dominating, haha.

: D

Hah! I love how you ended it... the chapter was so well-rounded. And whenever you start speaking in technical terms, it makes me smile. The chemistry between those two is white-hot. Can't wait for more!

P.S. Lucky duck! Have fun at the concert!

I love the story title. I love the layout. I love the song. I love the storyline. I love your writing. This is great all around.

Right...so...I basically LOVE this story!!
It's so awesome.
More =D x

Haha, I love how you incorporated "Afterlife" into this story, and how original this story is. I have to agree with Cat with Brian saying that in a non-sexual way.

Mmmmm so I loved this line from Brian.. "I don't want to strain you too much." -- I know it's not in any way intended to be sexual on his part, but my mind totally went there haha. Especially since we all can assume where his and Jen's relationship is going to end up. :tehe:

By the way, what is your new job? I don't think I ever asked you.

The storyline is very original, I'm definitely liking this. :)

You know what?? I'm starting to love Special Update Saturday...yup. Yup I doooooooo.
I love this story!! x

Yayyy I get to learn technical terms and techniques of the studio!
No, that wasn't sarcasm :D
But yeah. I'm really looking forward to this ^>^