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  • Bright Eyes ;

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    This story is super-duper fantastical ;D
    It's really captivating and original.
    No matter what you wrrite, I always end up loving it. :]
    Not to mention the fact that it's uber addicting.
    I'm definitely excited for the next update. ((:
    August 18th, 2009 at 03:03am
  • Silently_Broken

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    you're story is amazing, can't wait until the next update (:
    August 16th, 2009 at 06:36am
  • theohsosweetnitemare

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    So good, can't wait till the next update (:
    August 13th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • Much Better

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    Well Tom's burst of anger was rather random, if I do say so myself.
    August 13th, 2009 at 02:59pm
  • Jay Lynn

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    Oh wow. I'm speechless hun. That was so sad! Dx
    I can't believe I'm saying this, but I think Tom is breaking off their friendship. :' (
    August 13th, 2009 at 05:45am
  • sary_sea

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    ftw....tom's got himself a lil devil in him. oli should have stepped in before tom completely flipped. but i loved it.
    August 13th, 2009 at 03:31am
  • absolution

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    gosh, tom is a real prick, although i'd be pretty mad.
    amelia is pretty needy and a little self centered, but hey!
    i love her.

    maybe oli should give her some lovin', ehh?
    ;)
    August 13th, 2009 at 03:13am
  • mackenzie.

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    poooor tommmmmy.
    and sttupid me acting like an oblivious douchenugget! ahahahah

    I love oliver. he needs to just spill his guts already! what's wrong with him! D:

    and you know I don't approve of your short chapters!
    WRITE MORE!
    GRRR!!!!
    August 13th, 2009 at 01:31am
  • barbarienne

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    holy effing shit Tom!
    Where in the hell did that come from?

    oh man.
    i love this story.
    please update soon. :D
    August 13th, 2009 at 12:51am
  • thetoasted

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    that's not fair. but when did tom ever need amelia's help? so he's the selfish one, making her think that he's gonna be her best friend till the end and whatnot, then lashing out all of a suddenly because she never offered him her shoulder to cry on.
    :/
    i don't like tom right now.
    but i'm loving oli! how cuteeee! he should just come out and say what's on his mind, like an impulsive now-or-never thing.
    August 13th, 2009 at 12:25am
  • mr. owl

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    “Yeh out of yeh bloody mind, woman,” I say, shaking my head,
    i believe small chuckle fell out of my mouth when i read that (:
    you did an amazing job on this last one. acutally, they're all incredible, but i think that one was my favorite.

    your description is amazing.

    i can't wait to see what happends.
    (:
    amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing.
    August 10th, 2009 at 08:19pm
  • PorcelainPlanes

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    That one was amazing. So much detail and description. I really, really liked it. I think a chapter can hardly ever be too long! Haha.

    The description of the eating disorder is great, too. It really is in such great detail, and extremely believable. But I hope she does stop.

    I'm still super excited to see what will happen once she heads over to talk to Oliver.
    August 10th, 2009 at 09:47am
  • mr. owl

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    Dude. Fuck me.
    I was subscribed to this damn story.
    And somehow I got unsubscribed, and now I'm all behind in reading it.
    For the love of God.

    I am resubscribing and finishing this.
    August 10th, 2009 at 07:49am
  • Jay Lynn

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    I thought the chapter was lovely. Eating disorders are a hard habit to break. But not impossible. But I have no room to talk. Anyways, no the chapter wasn't too long. It was perefect, and I wish there was more lol. Update soon?
    August 9th, 2009 at 11:35am
  • SamanthaPaige

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    to long? please i want more!
    August 8th, 2009 at 08:48am
  • mackenzie.

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    so i see your chapters are becoming massive....i must be wearing off on you!
    hahahaha no

    you know i love the content of this chapter. the binge was great. it was really well writen and i approve.

    ALTHOUGH THERE ISNT ENOUGH TOM&MACKENZIE EATING TOAST TOGETHER IN THIS!

    ahahaha update soon :D
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:53am
  • thetoasted

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    awesome update you got there! long chapters are good chapters. ^.^
    i can't believe lia thinks it was a mistakeee! and oli's all over excited about her coming over, haha. what a cutie pie. wonder what's up with tom?
    August 8th, 2009 at 06:50am
  • absolution

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    what amelia goes through is simply tragic.
    awesome update tho!
    August 8th, 2009 at 05:00am
  • munch

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    This story is amazing!
    I coudn't find one bad thing about it if I tried.

    & I sence somethings up with her parents. Relization perhaps? God I hope so, but with my lack of brains cells I could be way off. haha
    August 8th, 2009 at 04:47am
  • a quarter and a kiss

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    OMGOSH. She's at it, still.
    Oh, well. Boys alone aren't enough these days, I guess.
    August 7th, 2009 at 03:25pm