If your heart stops beating - Comments

  • AliciaIero

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    No Alec :( I guess it's a sweet ending though!
    July 16th, 2012 at 07:22am
  • Caustic_Chaos

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    If it wasn't 2:32am right now, i would have finished this, it was that good. I'm hoping to move on to the sequel by tomorrow.
    February 19th, 2008 at 08:33am
  • Mary Ragamuffin.

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    "if bob, frankie, mikey and ray were hanging off a cliff, which one would you save?
    Gerard: i'd jump too"

    Oh, so NOW I know where you got that one from! XD

    Lol, hm I wonder where you got 4x+x from aye? Was I being a dum coconut at Maths that day?! >_<
    January 2nd, 2008 at 06:37pm
  • Bellkura

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    40 was the chapter that really got to me. *hates you but loves you at the same time*
    September 15th, 2007 at 04:18pm
  • Bellkura

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    WTF? Setting up a laptop in half an hour? UNHEARD OF. Unless you like straight from the box kinds of things. Or Ray, Bob, Gerard and Mikey set up stuff beforehand for him.
    OH NO! But but but-

    And why does Jaima have such a quick birth?
    September 15th, 2007 at 04:15pm
  • Bellkura

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    Huh, kill someone major. Aren't you already going to do that?
    Whoa, sudden time skip there after the song.
    Such a pretty song that Alex compositioned though. Even though I'm not sure what it does sound like...
    September 15th, 2007 at 04:11pm
  • Bellkura

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    Oh noes! Does he have something like pneumonia? Anyway...
    5x
    September 15th, 2007 at 04:05pm
  • what?

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    wazoo that's an ending fer shure teehee very nice though claps for you!
    September 9th, 2007 at 04:56am
  • SomewhereLifeIsGood

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    well...
    not kind of.
    it was rlly SAD ;( T T
    :(
    September 9th, 2007 at 04:11am
  • SomewhereLifeIsGood

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    that was kind of sad, but kool.
    thanx!
    September 9th, 2007 at 04:07am
  • Deadly_Dreamer

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    oh shit! the last chapter made me cry!! i felt so sorry for Frankie! how many times had he nearly lost Alec??? then for him to die at the end was just sooo sad!! awesome story though! *stares at a picture of Frankie, then bursted into tears* see what you have done to me???

    yeah, anyiero..... that was awesome, you should write another, and soon!!
    September 8th, 2007 at 05:33pm
  • Superhero.

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    Ugh. I almost cried.
    I was so close to tears.
    Cuz I was like 'He lived!'
    And then he was dead.
    And I almost cried.
    September 8th, 2007 at 05:31pm
  • Hayley-x-Bailey

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    I'm commenting, now don't kill anyone off =D

    Anyways, great story, I'm on edge waiting for more!
    September 8th, 2007 at 04:10am
  • Superhero.

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    Ooooh!
    I get it!
    The Parade bit... and his dad used to take him to the christmas parade...
    Ahhhh!

    Yay!
    September 8th, 2007 at 02:26am
  • gerardlover21

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    kaite was so cute!!!!!!! :mrgreen:
    September 2nd, 2007 at 03:43am
  • gerardlover21

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    kaite was so cute!!!!!!!1 :mrgreen:
    September 2nd, 2007 at 03:43am
  • Superhero.

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    Haha
    "Tell it to your diary, isn't that what girls do?"
    Haha!
    I love Alec. He is so cute. XD

    More soon?
    September 1st, 2007 at 09:17pm
  • Bellkura

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    Well of COURSE something's going to happen in six months, the baby will be born. DUH.
    But so sad the world revolving around Jaima and Alec cracking because of that.

    But apart from that, I think I've spammed this enough... But just continue with nice fluff and I'll be happy. (Though considering fluff can be when a person is injured, you're not too limited)
    September 1st, 2007 at 07:27pm
  • Bellkura

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    I'm so sorry for the spam, but Katie dancing is so cute and Alec knowing lots about dancing is so squeeable.
    September 1st, 2007 at 07:21pm
  • Bellkura

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    Fluff~ Oh how I love thee for adding it.
    September 1st, 2007 at 07:08pm