Lovin it. The mouse-trap thing was really well thought out. Dunno, it be funny! XD I am contributing to your growing comments, & will not stop until you get all the stars on that star chart thingy! >_<
Hmm. What tune is it? I don't have a piano and I sure as hell don't know how to play it. Just a couple of notes. I'm not that talented. Lol. This is awesome. Please write more!
**NEW READER** Heyy I like this! I'm usually reading frerards and vampire fics, so this one was a bit different from what I'm used to x] But tis brilliant!! More soon!! <33
Cute, fluffy 'family' scenes makes my heart goo. Nice to see your sensible way of writing is still hanging around, even if your torture of slash shippers is something new to me. *hugs*