All We Had to Keep Us Safe - Comments

Okay, well I said I was going to leave a proper review after I finished reading.
Unfortunately I'm not going to finish reading, because it's not my cup of tea.
I wasn't very fond of the rush it was written in, nor the clichéd "damsel in disress" storyline.
Neither did I like the layout you used on your writing, and how you paragraphed it.
Sorry, just not my cup of tea.

Cheerio.

^ I mean reading, because obviously you wrote this story and I'm just reading it x]

I'm going to leave a proper review once I'm done writing this story, but I'm just gonna add one thing right now: I had to click "custom layout" because the colors and the align of the story area bothered me.

wow. I read this story in one night and I can say that I loved it. :D

You Have to Believe Me

You have no idea how happy I am that she and Bob can now be together.
I hope Chloe and the new baby will be okay with everything that’s happened in the past and I just hope the way Mark behaved hasn’t effected the way Chloe grows up.

I love this story so much – I’m going to go read your new story now. I love how each new story you write is about a different member for My Chemical Romance. After this new Gerard Way one, if I’m right, you should have to write one about Ray Toro which I’m looking forward too!

x

Sorry it’s taken me so long to leave my next comment/mini review but I had to make a cup a tea – it’s what I’m running on at the moment.

Go to Hell

I can’t believe Mark is dead...
Jade you fucking moron!
You should be with Bob!
Stop fucking crying over Mark!

Please Be Careful

I’m glad Jade can understand why Bob’s been so hurt by the fact she’s still in love with Mark and having another his second child. I’m glad that she loves Bob although she doesn’t love him as much as she loves her husband or he loves her, they’ll work it out somehow.

Please don’t let Mark hurt Bob! I don’t think Jade nor Chloe could cope if something happened to Bob :cry: This story has my wrapped around his little finger, it honestly does. You have no idea how much I’ve missed it.

You Do Need Me

That chapter made me cry.
I feel so sorry for Jade, Chloe and for poor Bob.
It must be so hard for them to have to leave everything again, it reminds me of the bridge in Taking Back Sunday’s This Photograph Is Proof (I Know You Know)

It hurt to read about Bob and Jade having that argument
I’m glad that Bob’s finally been able to tell Jade how he feels though she doesn’t seem to feel the same way nor did she even think about kissing him back..

Such a sad chapter...

I’m so sorry it’s taken me so long to catch up with stories!
I’ve been back from Cornwall for two weeks tomorrow but I’ve just no had the energy to read any stories or I’ve been at work...
You’ll get a new comment for each update I’ve missed
Neat, eh?
I’m catching up now x

ugh, dosen't Jade know that when you assume you always make an ass of yourself? OH well, I kinda' can't stay mad at her since she apologized and actually told Bob she loved him.
It was a sweet and perfect ending to a suspenseful read. Good job Brookie.

Great story =]

OH MY GOD JADE!!!! WHAT THE FUCK?! BOB ALMOST GAVE HIS LIFE TO PROTECT YOU! AND HE WOULD HAVE!! YET YOU GO OVER TO THE MAN WHO BEAT YOU, TRIED TO KILL YOU, AND WAS STALKING YOU TO KILL YOU, CHLOE, AND YOUR UNBORN BABE!?!?!?!GAH JADE!!! FUCK YOU! YOU MOTHERFUCKING BITCH!!
*goes over and bitch slaps her. walks over to unconscious Bob. picks him up and drives to hospital.*While in ER waiting room calls Jade* Bitch you don't even deserve to know bob or to have such a beautiful girl as chloe...FUCK YOU!!

Haha what's wrong with Bob's language? It was COMPLETELY called for.

Believe me, it was nessicary what he said, and if I was in Bob's position, I would've said the same thing.

Great update. =]

great story i feel bad 4 choele she is only 3yr old and inocent and bob is da coolest dude jade sometime she get spoil i luv this story *pass a grammy award*

EVIL!!! pleasepleaseplease update this asap!!! you canNOT just leave it hanging like that!!

he finally admitted it to her!

OMGAH!! JADE YOU ARE AN IDIOT!!! wasn't it obvious how He felt about her?! even without his point of view chapter, it was obvious how he felt!!!!!!!!
so stupid! and why shouldn't she pick him?Mark is an ASSHOLE!! And we already knew that he would kill Jade and chloe as well as the unborn babe, no matter what!!!

gah!! i am really frustrat3ed right now!!

*shuns Jade and introduces Chloe to the magical world of Harry Potter.*

I wish the argument hadn't happened, but its understandable why it did.