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  • secrets-that-die

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    Awe
    July 1st, 2009 at 10:15pm
  • Gerardxisxmyxfantasy

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    Noo!!! Murder Mark and fall in love with Bob!!! Grr... When I saw the title I though she was leaving Mark but didn't have anywhere to leave to. :( Mark shall die. I shall rip his head off and feed it to the meese. Or moose, or what the fuck ever!!! Anyways, is there a chance you can kill Mark, just for me? Please? O_O
    July 1st, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • x.SocialReject.x

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    oh...sadness, i miss him already. *tears* keep 'em coming bud!!
    July 1st, 2009 at 09:15pm
  • lindsaylunacy

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    I would like to point out Mark is a huge fucking tool and I want to beat the shit out of him for how he treats her, and making her throw her friendship with Bob away.

    =[
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:45pm
  • The Color Wini

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    I’m sorry too. I’ll never find another friend who understands me like you. I hope everything works out in your life, and you have a better one than I have. Just please let me know every day if you’re okay. Just so I know. Love, Bob.

    P.S. If you ever change your mind or even just want to talk and then ignore me again, I’m here. I’ve got nowhere else to go. I also wanted to point out that you said he’s more important than me. That’s great, but where do you fit in? Are you important to yourself?


    That chapter's made me cry :cry:
    It's so sad!
    Bob won't give up on trying to help her...Bob's not like that!
    July 1st, 2009 at 05:35pm
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    aww, bob and chole are so cute together. and mark is going to be so furious! update wicked soon!
    July 1st, 2009 at 03:51pm
  • lindsaylunacy

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    Oh man, Mark is gonna trippp!

    Great update. You decribe emotions very well. =]
    July 1st, 2009 at 10:33am
  • x.SocialReject.x

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    Mark is totally going to hir her in front of Bob!! isn't he?
    Jade and Bob make such a cute couple!! they already act like parents with chloe.

    Can't wait for more Brookie!
    July 1st, 2009 at 04:45am
  • secrets-that-die

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    O.o i wonder what's mark going to do
    Loved the update
    Can't wait for more
    July 1st, 2009 at 03:31am
  • Gerardxisxmyxfantasy

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    Awww...Bob is such a sweetie pie teddy bear!!! I wish Mark would've died in a not-so-tragic car wreck... Then they could get together and Chloe would have a good daddy. :D thanks for updatinggg!!!!
    July 1st, 2009 at 02:18am
  • The Color Wini

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    If she has a daughter then she needs to get out of that relationship; she's really putting Chloe in danger!

    “Daddy doesn’t read to me,”

    “I’ll read to you more often, then,"


    That made me awww so loudly then! that is just so cute!!

    But it was too late. Mark walked through the door connected to the garage, already flowing with anger.

    I hope Bob gets her out of there, not only for her sake but for chloe's too...I know what it's like growing up in that kind of house hold...it's aweful!
    June 30th, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    Yay, a Bob fanfic. There aren't enough of them. Seems pretty awesome so far. update wicked soon!
    June 30th, 2009 at 04:03pm
  • The Color Wini

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    First off, both the title and the layout are beautiful - you have a real gift for them as all your titles are fitting and all your layouts are perfect :cute:

    The opening of the story is so...strong and powerful, it made my eyes widen in shock at it.

    And then he’d his me and left. I couldn’t believe he’d actually laid a hand on me.

    I think that's meant to be

    And then he’d hit me and left. I couldn’t believe he’d actually laid a hand on me. :cute:

    I love the starting of this story, like I have all your others.
    You're on of my favourite writers on Mibba,
    One of my favourite writers full stop.
    You're amazing, you really are.
    I can't wait until I can buy your books in the shops :cute:
    June 29th, 2009 at 08:19pm
  • Hailstorm.

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    Great chapter. Can't wait for more (don't deprive us of Bob!).
    June 29th, 2009 at 05:10pm
  • x.SocialReject.x

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    great first chapter bud! by the way the ending chapter for the M.Way story was perfect. That's really cool how you started and ended in the same place. GOOD JOB! *thumbs up* can't wait for more Bob!
    June 29th, 2009 at 06:58am
  • Gerardxisxmyxfantasy

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    Ohhh goose bumps!!! Great first chapter!!! I love Bob. The world needs more Bob fanfics :D
    June 29th, 2009 at 03:54am
  • lindsaylunacy

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    I love Bob. I don't think there's enough fan-fics about him, so I'm really excited!

    Can't wait to see how it all unfolds. =]
    June 29th, 2009 at 02:43am