All We Had to Keep Us Safe - Comments

I'm starting to (finally) comment on the stories that I read. so...here goes...
I really love this story :) I can't really find many good Bob stories, so THANK YOU for writing this! Haha I was waiting for Bob to do something like kiss her.
Please update this as fast as you can possibly type up the next chapter! ;p

Such an asshole. I hope Bob rips him apart, and Jade pulls the trigger.
sorry for such a dark comment, but mark is (hopefully) going to pay.

I loved the split P.O.V's and the title to go with it.
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That update broke my heart.
Bob's in love with Jade, that's easy to tell
He's upset with her...
That's hard...

Mark is just making me want to fuck him up....
I'll kill him the moment I get back from Cornwall :file:
I promise.

I'm leaving in just over 24 hours.
This shall be my last comment to you for two weeks.
This chapter made me cry
I know what it's like to have to run from your father...
We've been doing it for nearly 3 years now...
Thank you for crediting me for the Mark's POV chapter :cute:
I can't wait to get back and read all the updates
I'll miss this story and your writing.
You better have written loads of updates by the time I've get back :tehe:

x

Being pregnant in that situation is NOT a good thing. =[

aww chloe is so cute.

oh man i have the most horrid feeling. That Mark is going to come to the hotel and go all "Jack Nichalson" on their ass 'Here's Johnny!!' *breaks down door with ax*

oh that would scare the shit out of me!! Can't wait for more!

Chloe is adorable.

We all ate very quietly. There was not any conversation. Then, out of nowhere, Chloe blurted out, “Thanks, Bob.”

He looked at her and asked in surprise, “For what?”

“For being nice to us,” she replied bluntly.

He smiled. “No problem, Chloe.”

Those lines made my heart melt; that was so adorable :cute:
I'm going to be really upset when I go on holiday because I'm going to miss all of your story updates but at least it gives me some reading to do when I get back :tehe:

aww, loved the update
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mark is crazy
can't wait for more
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That motherfucker!! *Kicks open trunk and starts trudging back to Bob's apartment* He's going to be sorry he ever came to Chicago. *Buckles sword to hip pulls out crossbow, loads, and for good measure...turns on bat signal.*

That was a really great update, minus the fact that Mark was trying to kill them. =]

You just have to start this kind of thing before I go on holiday, don't you?
Amazing update
I'm dying to know what else is going on
Are you going to do a chapter in Mark's POV?

Ohhhh fuck.

Need more!

dude, is mark a stalker?
update soon please!!

Holy fuck! it's the cops! *grabs coke and mentos. does backward flip over couch and flies out window.*

(that would be so cool if i could actually do those things.)

No! Mark couldn't have found them!
I don't want them to hurt!
I want them to be safe!

I get why the title is what it is now
It fits so well :cute:.

Whenever I see the name Mark I can only picture Mark O'Connell, the drummer for Taking Back Sunday even though he's a sweetheart and would never hit his wife:tehe:

wow this story have some part of drama that make me holmost cry and the part that maybe she was pregement i was in shock seriusly tell me if u make more chapter i wanna see chap 13 that will be good and shocking im pretty sure of that...ps good story