August 7th, 2007 at 11:16pm
awesome update
very well written
more soon
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August 7th, 2007 at 05:36pm
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omg thats so good, I have to write it somewhere...- horsie890:
- BOB THE BRYAR OWNS YOUR FACE.
August 7th, 2007 at 03:38pm -
*laughs hysterically a fourth time* I love you too, Loopy. And the SMM. And wfs. And, well, everyone who's ever read and commented my stories. Ever.- lups:
- ^lol @ Bob The Bryar
*slaps Gee* YOU DONT TALK TO LITTLE FRANKIE LIKE THAT! *mad* I know youre suffering and stuff, but the dude crossed the country to see you!!!
*slaps Frank* YOU CANT LIVE GEE LIKE THIS!! He needs you all! I dont care if Jamia is having your twins or whatever, you cant leave!
I love this story. I love drama. I love when theyre in pain. And I love you for giving me awesome things to read at 2:00am!!
See you around.
Loopy =]
BOB THE BRYAR OWNS YOUR FACE.August 7th, 2007 at 03:27pm -
^lol @ Bob The Bryar
*slaps Gee* YOU DONT TALK TO LITTLE FRANKIE LIKE THAT! *mad* I know youre suffering and stuff, but the dude crossed the country to see you!!!
*slaps Frank* YOU CANT LIVE GEE LIKE THIS!! He needs you all! I dont care if Jamia is having your twins or whatever, you cant leave!
I love this story. I love drama. I love when theyre in pain. And I love you for giving me awesome things to read at 2:00am!!
See you around.
Loopy =]August 7th, 2007 at 03:13pm -
Perfect. The emotions in Gerard are raw, captured perfectly.
AND HOW COULD YOU FUCKING KILL BOB THE BRYAR!
Don't answer that. xDAugust 7th, 2007 at 01:00pm -
*laughs hysterically again* I love you too.- waitingforsomething:
- I love how you always capture the tenderness and the tragedy together so perfectly. I would have read the first chapter when you first posted it and commented on it seperately, but I didn't even realize it was here until just now. And you're always so great at leaving things unsaid. I mean, just enough, not so much that it's confusing. It really adds something to your stories. Great job.
Oh yeah. I forgot. YOU MURDEROUS BITCH! YOU KILLED BOB!!!
August 7th, 2007 at 09:09am -
I love how you always capture the tenderness and the tragedy together so perfectly. I would have read the first chapter when you first posted it and commented on it seperately, but I didn't even realize it was here until just now. And you're always so great at leaving things unsaid. I mean, just enough, not so much that it's confusing. It really adds something to your stories. Great job.
Oh yeah. I forgot. YOU MURDEROUS BITCH! YOU KILLED BOB!!!August 7th, 2007 at 08:36am -
I am so sorry, but I am trying not to laugh right now.- Lemon Paranoia:
- The way you write emotion. It breaks my heart. In a good way. Lol.
I hope Bob gets justice for the person who killed him.
Me and my sick sense of humor. -_-*August 7th, 2007 at 06:53am -
=0 Bob is dead...
Woahhhhh
very very very good story!!
Gerrards emotion just lepts out the computer screen!
And its beautifully written!August 7th, 2007 at 06:23am -
The way you write emotion. It breaks my heart. In a good way. Lol.
I hope Bob gets justice for the person who killed him.August 7th, 2007 at 06:08am -
This is really deep. I love it.August 7th, 2007 at 02:46am
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AWWWWWWW!!!!!!! NO DON'T LEAVE!!!!!!!!
more soon?xoxoAugust 7th, 2007 at 02:05am -
Bob's dead...>.< wow...erm..
awesome story.
I love it tons so far.
more soonAugust 6th, 2007 at 08:34pm -
Bobs DEAD! I'm sad now. But seriously great short story. It made me sad though.August 6th, 2007 at 05:11pm
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you killed bob!
o.O
this is REALLLLLLLLLY awesome!!
I love it!
UPDATE SOON!!! <3August 6th, 2007 at 04:01pm -
I loved it.
Great detailing, Very well written.
I'm suscribing.
=]August 6th, 2007 at 12:38pm -
aww, Bob is dead???
Anyway, I love how you wrote it, its awesome, more soon?xoxoAugust 6th, 2007 at 06:35am -
Just wanna let you know I read this... and it's beautiful.
I'm gonna give a full review later. I'm half-dressed and the school bus is coming in like, 3min.August 6th, 2007 at 05:12am -
Woah. That was intense... Gerard's emotions ripped right through.
Bob died..? How..?
I love your little one-shot's, but I personally don't think this is one of your better ones. Lovely little read though. =)August 6th, 2007 at 03:04am
ok, there's so much going on here... First of all, Frank has a kid! I died of cuteness just to imagine how gorgeous his kids would be. And then Gee, poor Gee. He's so messed up and I want to hug him... but I won't. And poor Mikey as well: nine and a quarter years later and he still feels ignored. And OMG, I know it was the saddest part of the chapter because you were letting us know that Ray was dead too, but I couldn't contain myself from laughing so hard at ''Back and forth. Bob and Ray''... LOL I just imagined them saying ''Hi, I'm Back -- Hello, I'm Forth'' It was hilarious, at least in my head. *rolleyes* BUT WHAT THE HECKNESS!??!?! @ Ray dead...
The last lines made me think real deep, and I came up with a conclusion, but I won't tell in case I'm wrong so I don't look like an idiot... OR in case I'm right, so I don't ruin the fun.
See you around
Loopy