August 7th, 2007 at 11:16pm
awesome update
very well written
more soon
omg thats so good, I have to write it somewhere...
- horsie890:
- BOB THE BRYAR OWNS YOUR FACE.
*laughs hysterically a fourth time* I love you too, Loopy. And the SMM. And wfs. And, well, everyone who's ever read and commented my stories. Ever.
- lups:
- ^lol @ Bob The Bryar
*slaps Gee* YOU DONT TALK TO LITTLE FRANKIE LIKE THAT! *mad* I know youre suffering and stuff, but the dude crossed the country to see you!!!
*slaps Frank* YOU CANT LIVE GEE LIKE THIS!! He needs you all! I dont care if Jamia is having your twins or whatever, you cant leave!
I love this story. I love drama. I love when theyre in pain. And I love you for giving me awesome things to read at 2:00am!!
See you around.
Loopy =]
*laughs hysterically again* I love you too.
- waitingforsomething:
- I love how you always capture the tenderness and the tragedy together so perfectly. I would have read the first chapter when you first posted it and commented on it seperately, but I didn't even realize it was here until just now. And you're always so great at leaving things unsaid. I mean, just enough, not so much that it's confusing. It really adds something to your stories. Great job.
Oh yeah. I forgot. YOU MURDEROUS BITCH! YOU KILLED BOB!!!
I am so sorry, but I am trying not to laugh right now.
- Lemon Paranoia:
- The way you write emotion. It breaks my heart. In a good way. Lol.
I hope Bob gets justice for the person who killed him.
ok, there's so much going on here... First of all, Frank has a kid! I died of cuteness just to imagine how gorgeous his kids would be. And then Gee, poor Gee. He's so messed up and I want to hug him... but I won't. And poor Mikey as well: nine and a quarter years later and he still feels ignored. And OMG, I know it was the saddest part of the chapter because you were letting us know that Ray was dead too, but I couldn't contain myself from laughing so hard at ''Back and forth. Bob and Ray''... LOL I just imagined them saying ''Hi, I'm Back -- Hello, I'm Forth'' It was hilarious, at least in my head. *rolleyes* BUT WHAT THE HECKNESS!??!?! @ Ray dead...
The last lines made me think real deep, and I came up with a conclusion, but I won't tell in case I'm wrong so I don't look like an idiot... OR in case I'm right, so I don't ruin the fun.
See you around
Loopy