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  • citylights-

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    i don't likee how alex and brooklyn fought, but i still loved this chapter anyway :)

    moremoremoree!
    June 18th, 2010 at 05:50am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    Someone needs to tie Zack up and make Alex show himself to Zack...
    hahah,
    June 18th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    June 17th, 2010 at 05:10pm
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    Great Chapter :)
    June 17th, 2010 at 10:47am
  • superamy2014

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    I can honestly say this is one of the best stories I've read. (:
    It's truly fantastic.
    Updates are appreciated (:
    June 17th, 2010 at 09:26am
  • this.is.sparkle!

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    Dude.
    I'm soo freaking in love with this story.
    STILL.
    You guys do some amazing work.
    Love,
    megan
    June 17th, 2010 at 07:45am
  • JesusOfSuburbia

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    Uh ohhh. Brooklyn's drunk. lol. Eh, I don't like Zack's denial issue. Alex is a ghost, get used to it already. -__- And he misses him, awh. :) But it's so sad how Alex screwed the girl Zack loved. :( That ain't cool.
    Update soon! ;DD
    June 17th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • crookshankz

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    I love the story it's amazingly good. Not going to say update soon cause I know people tell me to update soon then I don't and I feel really bad. So update whenever is good for you. ;3
    June 17th, 2010 at 05:05am
  • catgirl1321

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    And we love it when you update.
    so update soon?!
    June 17th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • tq6776

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    This one was really sad:-(
    Poor Zack!
    Update asap:-)
    June 17th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • jmjm

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    I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter. (:
    June 17th, 2010 at 03:51am
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    OMGEE i should be studying but i found this and decided to read it instead. SO i think that this idea is so original and fantastic that.. oh gosh i have no words. I find the characters amazing, and Jack on a drinking problem WHOOOOA. Didn't see that coming. I loved it when she told Zack off, I seriously, can't wait for more!
    June 7th, 2010 at 11:20am
  • Reckless

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    I love love love :)
    June 4th, 2010 at 11:30pm
  • mz00000

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    love it!
    June 3rd, 2010 at 07:16am
  • TheTakeover.

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    I'll be honest... when I began reading this story and realized Alex was a ghost... I was completely skeptical and didn't think I'd make it to the second chapter. But something made me read the next one... and the next one... until I got caught up and now I'm absolutely in love with this story. I love the fact that it isn't the average fan-fic! Both of you write really well and both complement each other. I'm excited for another update :)
    June 1st, 2010 at 05:36am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I loved it! :D
    Update soon!
    May 31st, 2010 at 04:23am
  • SuckerForCuteEyes

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    AWesome story, I love it so far....So, if Alex can feel things...he's turning back into a human, as in not ghost? So one day he's going to be a corpse? Or will he be alive again? lol I'm confused
    May 30th, 2010 at 03:21am
  • citylights-

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    i love this story! it's so original (:
    UPDATE SOON, PLEASE
    x
    May 30th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    May 29th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • catgirl1321

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    I love this. But like, it makes me sad, death makes me sad.... sometimes. but what is going on?! im subscribing.
    May 29th, 2010 at 09:18pm
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