Hello Brooklyn - Comments

YOU MADE ME CRY TWICE. wow i need another chapter.

the twist was NOT something I was expecting, but I freaking loved it.

okay, im seriously confused.
didn't jack see him at first? cuase like him and alex had conversations at the beginning of the story !

"Brooklyn... she's severely schizophrenic. I can't see Alex, but I go along with her hallucinations for her sake." When I read that... I literally felt my stomach sink. And at the end of the chapter, I was in tears. That was... severely unexpected... And quite honestly, I'm not sure if I'm loving it or hating it.
Either way, amazing job writing.

OMG i cant believe it, i i i thought she was really seeing Alex, i thought he was alive.
i want to cry now :(
gah the twist a writen masterpiece but i still wish he was really there

At the end of chapter 19 i only managed a "holy shit."
The twist was mind-blowing.

I love this. I had like, tears in my eyes at the end :( It was so horribly sad. But I'm pumped for the update(:

i love this. it's amazing!

:'O I are so confused. And so bummed at the same time!!!!! AHhhhh I wanna see what happens next. Poor Brookie.

I love this! Its very unique and unusual story! Although it would suck if Alex really did die. Hope he doesnt anytime soon^-^
Anyways, I like this and I like how you can potray one of the songs as her name! Update soon!

Ohhh, and I would love if you would read my story; its an Alex Gaskarth fic(;

Awh. This chapter was so sweet. :) And Alex is becoming more human! :'D
Update soon! <333

this made me happy.

i want mooore :D

but you guys need to update a lot more often :) just saying..

YES! :D
lol
He's alive-ish

OMG! IS HE ALIVE?
AHH!
update soon!

Oh my gosh, thank you for the update, it's been SO long! You guys need to update again really really soon... because I'm in love with this story!

love the update :D
so wait. . . is Alex becoming more human than ghost if he can touch everything now?

I just read this because I never turn a good dare. Ever.

I didnt read all the chapters yet, but this is uh-mazing.

Subscribing and all that jazz.

i just started reading, but i love it!
its very different but in a good way! update soon?

I wish I could have an update. D:

So, my friend Shawna finally remembered the title of this story, and I love it. More soon, please???