Hello Brooklyn - Comments

I'm so sad after reading this. Gosh, the whole plot line made me think of the end of A Walk to Remember for some reason. Just like, the whole him being with her concept. Although it was a bit different with that movie (because the main character didn't have Brooklyn's condition), but still, just the lost love in this story reminds me of that.
Was so sad when the twist happened and it turned out it was all just a figment. And even better twist would be making him actually exist after some proof or something, lol. Like blindsight everyone twice.
But, idk if you guys will ever continue this since it's been a minute. But I have some hope, maybe. Maybe you'll choose to one day.
But I wanted to leave this comment to maybe inspire you to do so, and let you know you would still have a reader if you do. I can't seem to leave this sight no matter how much I try.
But on another note, I seriously need to find a happy story to read now to contradict the sadness of this one, lol. But great job with what you two have of it; it's definitely unique and you're both extremely great writers. To have us on one path and then make a complete spin was very impressive. My only critique would be that Brooklyn's description sometimes changed; sometimes she would have 'emerald/green' eyes and sometimes they were told as 'blue'. Unless her eyes change between those colors, this was a bit contradicting. But that's really the only critique.
Hope to maybe one day see more of this. But if not, I really enjoyed what you two have of it; officially has me in tears as I type this. :'( Feel so sad that Alex and Brooklyn had to lose their love. Life isn't fair in this story.

ok, so i was kind of stalking your stories lately and i found this one. this surprised me so much. when you said "a very unusual alex gaskarth fanfiction" you meant it. omg this story is really unexpected and so captivating! i really wish you guys had continued it! it was really good!

Pleeeaase keep writing this! Its amazing! This is honest to goodness one of the best fanfics I have ever read in my life. Update soon please!!

I know it's been like months since you've updated but I'm still reading this story. It's too amazing! :)

DUDESSSS! iw as just remebereing this story thinking about how it was one fot he first all time low fan fics I had ever read a long time ago. and then I see my email and it says you updated, i screamed like a maniac. I love you guys so much for updating!

This is literally the best and most creative fan-fic I have ever read. I’m not even exaggerating. The whole idea for this story is so cool. And i almost started crying when Jack told Zack how Brooklyn was schizophrenic. I never would have seen that coming. And i love how as the reader, you absolutely believe that everything between Alex and Brooklyn is actually happening, and how you never even hinted that this was all in her head. Which is really sad by the way. And it’s also really sad that Jack is in love with her.
this story is one serious mind fuck. and i frickin love it.
keep up the amazing work!!!!!!!! :D <3

I'm actually kind of missing the old layout. Haha It seemed to fit the story a lot better, in my opinion.

Have I told you I'm addicted to this story?

this story is <3

How I feel about Zack: it's breaking my heart, reading how upset and angry he is right now. It's truly bringing me to tears, thinking back to the rest of the story and then this recent chapter. /:

I do like how Brooklyn seems to be trying to do things differently; it might be what she needs.

I'm completely baffled with this story. I just started reading this whole story today. Brooklyn is a schizo and Alex is dead, thats evident. How could she not remember her past though, with Alex and stuff? and Jack basically going along with what she was saying, thats not cool. this makes me think 'is she really that crazy'. why would they all lie to her? and how did it seem like only Jack knew about her in the beginning? Everything did seem real and i didnt think this story was going to go in the direction it has. i dont know whether i like it or not, the story is really awesome though, dont get me wrong. plus she didnt even seem that crazy. THIS STORY IS JUST CONFUSING TO ME!! You should work on some fast updates though (:

Is this going to be updated anytime soon?

I have to say I love the story! Randomly Miserable At Best by Mayday Parade started playing in my head while reading the chapter and the lyrics and the story are insanely similar. Except shes not cheating on anybody. Anyway keep up the good woek girls!

can't wait for more

love the update :D

D:
:O
Why would you do this?
Why would you LIE and make me think that Alex was really there?
That this was a story about a ghost?
Why would you lie to me like that?
Do you hate me?
Do you hate Alex?
What you did
It was so cruel.
I am sad now.
Alex, he, he's dead, and gone, and not coming back.
All because of you.
Why would you do this to me and Mr.Teddy Bear,
Why?

love it!!

is this the end or is there more??

This story is amazing.
I have to say one of the best stories i have ever read on this site.
I love it! (:

Awwwwwwww!!!!! Poor Jacky!!! How sad is he gonna be when he finds out she was imagining Alex....

Poor jack! I feel so bad for him now. And you really can't blame brooklyn because she really isn't in her right frame of mind at all.
However once again, a great chapteR and I can't wait to see what happens next!

ahhh :O
its Jack not Alex!
love the update :D