We Can Settle This Affair - Comments

Ha, I just figured out that the reason it didn't tell me you updated was cos I forgot to subscribe! Go me!

Welllll... I was mad at Gerard, and then happy with him, because really he has to have the sense for the both of them doesn't he? And then your last chapter made me cry. True. It has to have been real. My, like, biggest terror is that one day I'll wake up and find out everything I think I know is a figment of my imagination, and I've been insane for years. Terror meaning terror, and not just fear.

It's not a happy thought, and right now I am a Sylvie rocking backwards and forwards humming Green Sleeves. Cheers.

On to the sequel!

Oh; theres a link to the sequel. I DID NOT SEE.
IGNORE ME.

-is still confused-

Also; that's my name in there :')
Well, it's not, It's Jim's. But still. xD

AWH MAN.
Sequel, SOON!?

I'm so confused right now, but I don't care :'D

This story is one of the best ever!!

people READ the sequel!! ;)

Oh my fucking god.
Jesus shit woman.
CHRIST!

Okay, okay, calm down, Nesseh, calm down...
CHRIST!

I'm glad you ended it that way. A happy ending would not have suited this story at all. But still...
JESUS CHRIST!

Okay, so my theory is that she was dreaming about her past, and that a couple of years have gone by now since Gerard rejected her--I mean, you don't get into a mental hospital for nothing, you know? It takes some serious psycho shit. But then again, her parents already think she's nuts, soo...
My theory is that after Gerard rejected her, she went totally numb, and her parents were all "Ohmygod she's got issssueeeeeesss!!" so they signed her up for a mental hospital visit. And did I read that wrong or did the lady say Franklin Juvenile Facility for Mental Health? Franklin as in Franklin, Tennessee? As in, her parents really thought she was psycho enough to belong in Tennessee? Jesus....

Update soon or I'll find an excuse to take all the rainbows away from Ilya. I'll do it, too, I'm a cruel old bitch right now because of that ending.

WHUD DA-FUCKING-FUCK????
*speechless* O.O
U GOTTA UPDATE NOW FUCKERZ!!!!!!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
XOXOXOX

Too late, I imagined it. O.O

Ashley likes sex. O.o She's a fruitloop. I've tainted her mind.

NOOOOOOO GERARD. YOU IDIOT. YOU DON'T THINK OF WHAT'S 'RIGHT' OR WHAT THE FUCK EVER!!
NO. YOU FAIL.
Viola needs a huggles. What's wrong?? D=

IT'S OVER?! Sequel. =] That maketh me happy.
But, OH NO, VIOLA.
I'ma cry. )= Maybe...

Oh my god!
That was brilliant!!
So what, did Vi just pass out, and lose her memory? o.0
Maybe its something to do with the pills?
I wonder how long she actually HAS been in the hospital?
What if the whole thing about her and Gerard was a dream?

OoooOOooohh, that was such a great twist!
I really cant wait for the sequel! (;

plz post the sequel soon!!!

WTF!!!?!!?!!?!!?!!?!?!? i am so lost

OH MY GOD SHE ADMITS THE LOVE!!!!!!!
Gerard... Oh, Gerard... IS HE FUCKING CRAZY?!
No, apparently Viola is.
THEY WOULD BE THE PERFECTLY FUCKED UP COUPLE I WOULD READ ABOUT EVERY FUCKING DAY.
And they are... without the couple part because "they wouldn't be good together."
WHY IS VIOLA IN THE LOONY BIN???!!!!!!
Aaaaaah post the sequel soon because I can't breathe.
DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE?!

*gasps* NO NO NO NO NO! I need to know wha thappened! Seriously, you make me nuts *in a good way*.
Omg I never thought it would end this way! *cries and demands for some explanaitions* Oh pleeease! I was so shocked when I relaised that she is in a hospital and that it could be a dream. Your stories are breathtaking, addicting, extraordinary, fascination, full of drama.. one word: GENIOUS!!!

Hmm about what could have happened: Either it was all a dream and it never happened. MAybe Viola has been in this hospital for a really long time and started to get ilussions bout her former life which might have been a happy one but when she receives all the drugs from the hospital she started to mix all the memories.

Oooor this all really has happened but once Viola broke down or tried to commited suicide. Because? Well Gerard decided to stay with Diana cuz he thought the relationship with Viola would be screwed up. But after a while he breaks up with Dee and moves away or he dies. And this is too much for Viola so she goes insane, trying to drown herself and voiila, she is in this hospital and goes on a memory trip back into her past, back to the day where things started.

I hope you start soon with the prequel and that it will explain a few things. And I hope even more that you write more stories!

I admire you and your stories so much!

*hug*

Post the sequal ASAP!! I can't wait for more!

HOLY FUCK
I never for one minute would have thought that would have happened!
You NEED to tell me when you post the sequel!

HOLY SHT!
I never on my mind would though that
I can't want to see the sequel... Post an author note when you have it up

lolllmolly:

Keep writing! I love this story so much

Thanks you for the encouragement! Means a lot to my fragile ego!

FrancyPansy:

Too much drama?? XD XD Seriously, I looooove drama, especially your drama ^^.

Aw Frenie, I know I could always count on you.

Lilly_White:

Oh please hurry with the next chapter I am dying to know what happens. I need my crack LOL

lol I'm so flattered to have something I wrote compared to crack. I'm not sure but I reckon it's any writer's dream.

kitten-kat:

Not enough plot?!?!!
Are you fucking kidding?!?
I don't think that will be an accusation EVER swung your way Jay!

So...I'm really happy with Viola that she told Gerard, I didn't think she would.
I loved that Mikey was all "to the rescue" and mr. first aid! It was absolutely adorable, I must say! hehe

Now, let's talk about this, because, clearly, she's not in a very good situation, at least, at the moment. Although I should hate Gerard and fear for Viola since he's being slightly deranged and violent at the moment, I find myself, instead, cheering him on!!
I mean, no, I don't want him to hurt her, but, after all she's put him through, I'm glad that he's standing up to her. I'm glad he's finally defending himself, and Diana (even if for once Viola is right!) I hated that he just let her punch him in the gut and walk away with a smile all the time; it wasn't right.
That's not to say that I want him to hurt her! I don't!!! Please don't let him actually get violent and do something he's going to regret! Diana has done more than enough traumatizing, Gerard does not need to join in the "beat Viola parade"!!!

So...UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!! :D

Cheers
Kat

Aw thanks, Kat! I missed your reviews so much!

Brutal.:

If he rapes her I'm going to kick his ass.
That's right. You heard me. I went there.
I will jump through the computer screen, into the Universe of Viola, and I will grab Gerard by the throat and proceed to kick his ass.
And then I will kiss Mikey on the cheek, because he's a sweetheart.

But JESUS FUCK GERARD! You KNOW it's true! Your girlfriend is a FUCKING BITCHFACE! How can you not notice that? And please, just tell me this--I fucking know that Viola isn't exactly the most angelic teenage girl on the planet, but WHY, for FUCK'S SAKE, why would she forcibly carve five letters into her stomach hard enough to leave scars?! She's fucked up, but she's not a fucking masochist, and you of all people should know that!

I'm on Team Viola now. DOWN WITH GERARD THE JACKASS! DOWN WITH DIANA THE BITCHFACE!

It's amazing how you can do that, though. A few chapters ago I was ready to slap Viola very very hard, but now I want to throttle Gerard for even threatening to hurt her in the slightest bit. It's awesome how you can switch views like that, to reveal what characters are really like without going into a whole angsting session.

And no, I didn't think this chapter was pointless, I thought it was a good confrontation between the two of them. They need to get all the negative energy out.

But even after all that, I'm still hoping he won't hurt her, that he'll see the light and realize that she's just an idiot who's in love with him, and he's just an idiot who's in love with her.

And that Diana will fuck off and go to Texas.
That's right, Diana Bitchface! I said it! I went there! Just you try and hurt me, I'll sic Cyriacus on you and he'll tear you to shreds!

Update soooooon.

I don't know about Gerard And Dee but I'm scared of you and you're my own fucking wife. It's scary to have you on the opposite team. Particularly when you have Spike dude on your side -shivers-