Green Eyes - Comments

...the guys can't die...they just can't

*gasp!* Oh no no no no no no
she can't be right! she can't she can't
please update soon
<3 Michele

it has been so long <3 love it

hmmmm nice job
:]
very good plot decision
super good job
continue!!!!!
i think people r going to kill you... bahahaha
been there... u might wanna update for them

psh not nice womannnnnnnn, please post? *jimmys pout

Oooooo, I wonder who it is!?
Can't wait for an update :D
Tazz xx

is it leim? i think it is...i think that he is like her brother or something.

Yay! Update! :D Oooh, I wanna know who it is! XD

Chapter 34:

Hehe, new fuckin' avatar. Yeah, that's right, be jealous.
(And I got it from Tumblr :)

... You sure do seem to say 'green eyes' in this story a lot...
(Hehe, I wonder why)

God, you sure are being corny with this shit. (Not really shit, I still like it. I'm just saying...)

Bahaha, I love the itching/scratching analogy.
Made my fucking day :D
(... Those things aren't the same when they don't immediately turn into an actual yellow simley face...)

God, why are you making Kayla such a bitch? I was just starting to warm up to her (Haha, 34 chapters in)

Just for making that fucker short, you get a short comment. Ended with...

WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU, WOMAN?! YOU LEAVE US HANGING FOR THIS LONG, AND THEN PULL THIS ON US?
Ohh, you hate us, don't you?
Don't lie. You know I'm right. (... As per usual :)

WHO IS IT?!?!?!?!
please please please
let it be someone good
update soon please
<3 Michele

Love this story, you're an amazing writer.
I can't wait to find out what happens, the suspense is killing me!!
Tazz xx

Ch. 33

It made me cry! I can't wait for more! it's seriously amazing!

i wanna cry now :'(
love the update though :)

Amazing update!!!! I can't wait for more, yet again :D

Chapter 33:
('Tis chapter 33, right? The whole 31 32 thing threw me off.)

Jesus, you are fucking bipolar. And no, I'm not talking to God's only son, it was an expression. So, yes, it was directed towards you.

First it's like all funny and shit.
What with all the 'Zacky's raping me', the 'Jimmy-man' (very original name, by the way) stuff.
But I did love the cape bit. Now, just a question, was it a deathbat toilet paper cape? 'Cause that would be fucking amazing.

And then you get all sad and shit. Like, really? You made me cry, bitch.
Yeah, I get to use that now too.

But here in the new house, the computers on a floor with only the computer room, a bathroom, and the master bedroom. And bpth my parents are in nonoe of those rooms. In fact, mom's downstairs, and dad's buying breakfast (unless he was an old fucking ninja and snuck in with the food and never told me.)

So I was crying by myself. Slightly better than having my parents watch.

Bahahahahaa!
This chapter is dedicated to my fabulous friend Iggy (IgniteThisAngel.) for commenting about 30 times on every chapter of the story. Seriously, that deserves a juicebox.
To be honest, i didn't see the fabulous part until I pasted it here. So, thank you :D
You're finally being a good crazy Aussie.

Oh, and I agree with the person above me. I'm just too lazy to type all that out.

And lastly, I feel like I should have put '(hehe)' in here somewhere, so...
Brain! (hehe)

I don't think i have ever cried so much, when reading a chapter before
Zacky better keep his damn promise
that all of them come back alive
update soon please
<3 Michele

Chapter 31... Part Two?
Yeah, you labelled Chapter 32 as 31. Nice one, genius.

Oh, sure. Now you spell Sammy with an I again. You confuse me so much.

Hehe, I like Matt's tiny little speech in there. (And I'm not bringing up any more of it, this was the last chapter you wrote. You should already have a good idea of what happened there.)

Aww, he must feel horrible there. He's probably there to tell her about Vercro, and she's like, cowering away in fear. That was rather mean of you. Understandable, but mean.

Aww, youre so cheesy when you write disgustingly sappy scenes :D
I love it :)

Oh, you know what I could see happening?
They're like, in this lovey dovey moment, and then he goes to say something. She like, starts to build it up in her mind, wondering exactly how romantic it would be, when he blurts out 'Vercro's coming. Tomorrow' almost crelessly.
Way to kill a moment, huh?

Okay, so I'll actually have to wait to see what happens 'Tomorrow'. That's no fun. So go write. Like seriously, with all of these monsters of comments, you owe me.

Chapter 31:

SHAUNA FOUND A MISTAKE!!! *ahem* Sorry, but I take much joy in that :D
It said that the sun "shined" through, although I believe that the past form of "shine" is "shone". Otherwise, I'm just an idiot.
:D

Why did you make the first bit all sad, and then have it all happy, like two seconds later. {Refer to last comment for bipolar-ness lecture}

Hehe, maybe she could train her little gummie bears to form a little army and they cou-
Oh, nevermind.

Shoving a gummy bear in my mouth, I chomped it angrily. That’s right, gummy bear. Feel my pain.
Hahahaha, that was priceless :D

God, I love how much you say "sinister" in this story. It's just so refreshingly hilarious.

She was and would always be my best friend, no matter what Jimmy was convinced of. That brought a smile to my face. (Hey, shut up. We've already discussed how easy it is to make this sadistic bitch smile.)

Okay, can he just shut up with the whole I need her blood crap, and just drink one of those damn things they were talking about before?

Gah. Sammy? I believe you spelt it with an I before...
OMG, never mind! They're coming? Wha...?
Meanie head.

... In one Mibba day? Ohh, that's low. You better have some sort of miracle ending for this story.

Chapter 30:

Wow, that wasn't all too nice of you either. Making me feel for Zacky again. You must be bipolar, or something. Err, maybe e-bipolar? I dunno, one of the two.

Gah, Liam. Back. Truce? What kind of fricken mind game are you playing?
I don't trust you.

And then making me doubt Johnny, again? Dude, you're trrying to make my head explode, aren't you?

Brian snorted. ‘Just ask Jimmy for something. He drinks all kinds of crap.’
Hahahahaha, that's a very nice thing to say.

The Elvis Presley shake? You do not realzie how good you are, my friend. And by good, i mean in a writing way, not a personality way :D

Gah, you are some sort of bipolar. First she's all sad, the she gets offended, then she starts teasing Johnny. God, you and your mood swings.
That time of the month, maybe?

I agree with the first part of the author's note. Naughty Johnny. Although, I would have added another naughty in there, just for kicks.
Gah, your meanness is rubbing off on me.

Chapter 29:

Okay, I just couldn't help myself, I had to continue. And it's all your fault!

I don't like the beginning of that chapter.
Sure the part where she wondered if all of it had really happened was fine, but then you turned Zacky into some fricken psycho vamp!

God, you're so mean.

But it does seem like an evil dream you'd make her have. So I'm gunna go with that before I read on. And if it's not, I'm stealing back that purple deathbat cape I gave to you.

Ha! I knew it was a dream!

But then you were all sad and shit for Zacky. It made my beating heart sad :(
Okay, enough with the cheesy shit, Shepstone (Don't mock my stupid last name, 'kay? I get that enough from the rest of my friends.)

Aww, you're mean.
You maske me feel bad for Kayla. Then you turn around and make me feel bad fro Zacky. Then you do a fucking 180 and make me feel the same for Johnny.
Could you just make up your fricken mind, already?