Chasing Chaos - Comments

^ Ditto what they said. Right now I can't even see how things could go wrong... I mean, yeah, Oli screwed up, but he's being so sweet about it.

I got excited for a second when Gracie brought up the accident, but then Anna still didn't say anything. I guess I just have to wait and see.

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It's actually killing me waiting to find out what the heck happens to tear them apart, seriously.

Ditto. That chapter was just breath-taking. I can't even go on one of my rants about what I loved about it... I'm just stunned.

I really dig yeh're story. I'm half blind from reading all that text haha.

wow.

It's actually killing me waiting to find out what the heck happens to tear them apart, seriously.
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yay!! really good chapter xD

Good gracious I do believe it's been a while since I've left a comment. Reading the chapter last night definitely was motivation to get my lazy ass to drop one.

But it's been coming along so well. I honestly don't know what to think about 2009 Oliver, but I think there's good in him. Listening to Gracie give Anna the kick she needed seemed to open my eyes as well, and I started to have a bit more appreciation for '09 Oliver somehow. I think just hearing another character prove to Anna that she can't see what's going on in front of her is comforting in some way, because there's always times in everyone's life when they're blind to something that's happening. Unfortunately for Anna, she can't see that Oliver is possibly still in love with her.
That is, if they ever did get to the point of love.

And 2005 Oliver. Words can't even describe the love I'm feeling for him. He's perfect. He's caring. He's everything that he appears not to be. But only with Anna. Which is nice for a change, to see how much he cares about her in some way, even if they're not together or anything. Every segment of 2005 leaves me wondering what the fuck happened between then and now that changed everything.

I'm loving this. So much. :]

This is seriously my favorite story I've ever read on Mibba. Hands down

The first thing Gracie said when she saw me was “Fuckin’ hell, Anna, yeh look like death!”
-lol

“Wha’s this home business? Yeh are home, Annie. Sheff’s yer home,” she said this as if it were simple to just pick a place. Or a person.
- I agree. and sheff, haha.

I began tearing up, so I turned my face away, hiding it in my palm. I didn’t hide well; Gracie saw me very clearly and knew what was happening. I took her cleverness for granted so often. She was much more perceptive than her persona gave her credit for. Alarmed by my state, she said “I were only kiddin’, babe! Teasin’ yeh—Anna? Anna, are—“
-love

She turned her head to me with her easiest smile. Abrasive and bright as ever. “Are yeh really so thick? The boy’s ‘ad it bad for a long time.”
-:)

“Are yeh fuckin’ serious? It were o’ways about Tom. ‘E’s the only reason why Oli’s stayed away, isn’t it? Because Oli knew wha’ were more important.
-love

“Anna,” my Mum began with her pointed tongue. “We didn’t even know yeh were gone. But goddamn, I’ve been waitin’ for this. Waitin’ all summer for the call sayin’ yeh’ve gone and gotten into trouble. Jus’ like yer brother. An’ ‘ere yeh bloody are.”
-ridic!

*mouth drops*
OMG

wow...i was glad the Gracie was there to give her a little kick, cause i agree with you that she was getting a bit melodramatic, and you always need friends like Gracie. they're the ones that help you out the most, they are the bomb.

and as for the dramatics from the hospital in 2005, i was suprised when Tom walked in. and his reaction towards Sav, made my heart swell, he still cared. and for Oli to say that he hasn't been much of a good friend lately is kind of true, but was still a low thing to do.

i can't wait until the next chapter, i can't wait to see what you have install for us next. =]

God I love receiving emails saying this has been updated. I'm pretty sure you know how I feel about this story, seeing as it's my favourite and all, and I secretly love how you don't know where you're going with it. Because you haven't made up your mind which direction it's going to go, it means the readers won't have any hints in advance. (hell yes unpredictability)

this never ceases to amaze me. everything just keeps getting better and better, more intense. i cannot wait to see what happens next! straying away from the outline sometimes is just the way to go.

I really enjoyed the last chapter
...but in the last sentence I think you meant to say "tirade" and it says "tired."

I've made up my mind. She MUST be with oli!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so nervous to see what happens with sav telling peter about oli and what happens with oli after tom was yelling at him!

oh no! they have to be okay! is this the part where tom and savannah be friends gain and oli is left behind? oh my all the possibilities,,,,,

I love how in 2009, Oli just vwants her to be honest with herself. And yet she still is in this conflicted mind set and holding back on her feelings for him. She obviously deoesn't love Peter as she thought she did, so why lie to yourself? I thought it was sweet how he asked if it was okay to kiss her.

I'm not going to lie, the car crash scared me silly. It was like there was a sense of calm and then it just happened. By the way, I love the use of analogies in the 2009 part... it was so beautiful. Loved it as always, =)

There was a freakin' crash?!
The whole way through I was thinking, damn they're in the car, Oli's pissed in all senses of the word, neithers paying attention...shit, shit, but I thought, no, they'll be fine, Oli will be all brilliant and some shit, and then BAM, they fuking crashed. Jeeeez. My heart jumped a mile.

In 09, I love the way he asks if it's okay to kiss her, every time.
I also love that he's a little unguarded and feeling just as vulnerable as she is, and has been.

I've heard on the grapevine this is soon to be ending. I'm upset, but I'm thinking excitement is on the way and you so know how I love drama.

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That's another thing I like about having the 05 and 09 because not only do I learn about the past and the present at the same time but I'm reassured that nothing absolutely terrible happens to them resulting from the 05 because of the 09. :)

Loved this chapter!