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  • Dankee

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    Really cute!
    Loved the whole storyline Very Happy
    Bravo :D
    December 14th, 2012 at 02:38am
  • Schizofreeny

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    i know you get all happy when you see that someone's commented your story :]
    so here ya go...

    I'm still bummed out about the no Billie/Frank-thing. Haha.

    Anyway. Bye, playah!
    June 3rd, 2009 at 04:52pm
  • geraldine.

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    I'm both sad and happy that you've ended this story. Sad simply because it was a good story and I'll miss reading it; happy because I hope you will put new stories up that will have me, like this one had, on the edge of my seat, face in palm and eyes staring intently at the screen.

    You're writing is beuatiful, love. You have a way with painting this picture with your words, I can imagine all the situations in my head and I adore you for that. I get 'em all the time with other stories too, but they're sometimes blurred. It's awesome how clear the visions(?) get with this story.

    I'm not making any sense.

    I just... I simply love your writing. It's almost as beautiful as yourself.

    A great cloud slowly shielded us from the warming sun; dead leaves danced around on the street and the wind got a lot colder.

    You have a way of writing the most beautiful endings, love.

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    Shit, usch vad jag har saknat dig. Det var as kallt i Åre och ugh, det är för överskattat. Fast jag fick pizza varannan dag, så I really shouldn't complain...

    Ah, jag tog bort Air i förrgår. O_O It sucks, för jag har inte kvar den på Word. Bleh. Och jag tyckte om det första kapitlet. Fast jag tror att jag kanske har kvar det i min skrivbok...

    Jag älskar dig.
    You know that, right?
    Jag drömde föresten om dig two nights in a row. :file:

    Jag älskar Beyoncé. She's awesome. Jag fattar inte att du har lyckats få mig att lyssna på så många som jag för några år sen avskydde utan att jag då ens gett dom en chans... Jag är glad för att du skickade dom till mig.

    Ah, dude, spam or what? XP Fast jag orkar inte bry mig; jag saknar dig och du kommer inte förrän om en timme och tio minuter så jag får skriva en massa onödig skit.

    I've missed you and I still do. :arms:
    February 19th, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • Schizofreeny

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    wow... i wrote "i'll move on" a bunch of times in that comment..

    ah well, i'll move on.. HAHAHA
    February 7th, 2009 at 05:49pm
  • Schizofreeny

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    155 pages? ;O that's some craaazy shit!

    and GRFFTTHHH it's ooooveeeer *cries* ah well. i'll move on. and you'll write another story about frerard and I'll move on xD no but really, this was a good story. the only bad thing was that Green Day wasn't as involved as I'd hoped...

    ah well, you're writing is awezum and u know it :]

    LOG IN TO MSN NOOOOW XD
    February 7th, 2009 at 05:48pm
  • KranK

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    Awwww!

    This was so cute. I'm so happy that they are happy. I was beginning to worry there for a few chapters... I figured they would never work it out. Like, it was getting so depressing! I'm excited that they are back to being cute and that they understand each other.

    Oh Gerard and his hormones, perving on his baby brother. :D

    I didn't realize this story was coming to an end so quickly! But it ended at a really good time. It didn't drag on like a bad teen movie. It was lovely.

    xoxo
    Krank
    February 7th, 2009 at 01:26am
  • Angelus.

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    Wow, I wasn't expecting it to end, but I really loved that ending! I'm so, so happy that everything worked out for them =D
    I'm truly going to miss this story.
    :arms:

    Are you going to start a new story? xox
    February 7th, 2009 at 01:14am
  • merance

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    As anti-climatic as it was, I honestly think it couldn't have ended in a better way. Any longer and I think you might have dragged it on for too long.
    As it happens, the ending was great! :D And the story in general.
    Loved it.
    February 7th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • disturbedlife

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    0.o I never thought it was onna end like that. Oh well, I likes it. Even if it was weird. XD
    February 6th, 2009 at 09:14pm
  • Angelus.

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    DON'T BREAK UP DON'T BREAK UP DON'T BREAK UP!!

    Cry

    I hope he lets Gerard explain and apologise =) Awesome update - there were 2 updates that I hadn't read.. I don't think I got the last email! *cries*

    Can't wait for more =D :arms:
    January 16th, 2009 at 07:48pm
  • merance

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    Nice update! It made me laugh, and be all sad. :D

    I LOVE Bert's protectiveness. :cute:
    More soon, yah?
    January 15th, 2009 at 06:04pm
  • Schizofreeny

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    Så... new update... Fint. Gerard goes bloody, and he likes it right?

    I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE...

    sorry for that

    men seriously, det var en bra update, bara det att man inte fick reda på nåt. uäh. jag är nyfiken.

    love, your lover.
    January 14th, 2009 at 10:11pm
  • geraldine.

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    Love, I just really adore this story. It's well written, different and Cliché (Cliché, in a good way, of course). Plus, since you don't update very often (...) , it's even more fun to get an email notification thing, to see that you've updated.

    But really, your writing is too good for your own good.

    I've abandoned so many stories that I thought was good in the beginnings but turned out to be shit. I've stood by this story since you first sent it to me, and I'm glad I did.

    xoxo,
    your dear lover-stalker,
    isabelle.
    November 16th, 2008 at 02:24pm
  • Chazz_MCR

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    awww update soon, such a great story :)
    October 11th, 2008 at 07:06am
  • Schizofreeny

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    i wanna know what mikey and gerard really DID! :o
    September 20th, 2008 at 09:05pm
  • Cyanide Nightmare.

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    Please update soon!
    I need to know what happens!
    September 20th, 2008 at 06:26am
  • GenRage

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    Wow, Frank is really affected by this.
    But what was it, specifically, that Mikey and Gerard did?
    I'm pretty curious...
    more soon!
    <3
    September 19th, 2008 at 10:10pm
  • nope.

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    Frank's kinda pissing me off...
    September 19th, 2008 at 09:35pm
  • Angelus.

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    -dies of shock-

    YOU UPDATED!

    AYAY!

    aww, poor Frank.. but he should learn to be more resonable and listen to Mikey... I hope he doesn't screw things up for Mikey and Alicia! Poor Gerard Cry

    Can't wait for more =]
    September 19th, 2008 at 08:23pm
  • Underground Hero

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    Oh, and also-
    I think, for me, it would be the fact that Mikey and Gerard did something, rahter than the fact that they are brothers, strangely enough.
    September 19th, 2008 at 08:21pm