I'm both sad and happy that you've ended this story. Sad simply because it was a good story and I'll miss reading it; happy because I hope you will put new stories up that will have me, like this one had, on the edge of my seat, face in palm and eyes staring intently at the screen.
You're writing is beuatiful, love. You have a way with painting this picture with your words, I can imagine all the situations in my head and I adore you for that. I get 'em all the time with other stories too, but they're sometimes blurred. It's awesome how clear the visions(?) get with this story.
I'm not making any sense.
I just... I simply love your writing. It's almost as beautiful as yourself.
A great cloud slowly shielded us from the warming sun; dead leaves danced around on the street and the wind got a lot colder.
You have a way of writing the most beautiful endings, love.
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Shit, usch vad jag har saknat dig. Det var as kallt i Åre och ugh, det är för överskattat. Fast jag fick pizza varannan dag, så I really shouldn't complain...
Ah, jag tog bort Air i förrgår. O_O It sucks, för jag har inte kvar den på Word. Bleh. Och jag tyckte om det första kapitlet. Fast jag tror att jag kanske har kvar det i min skrivbok...
Jag älskar dig. You know that, right? Jag drömde föresten om dig two nights in a row. :file:
Jag älskar Beyoncé. She's awesome. Jag fattar inte att du har lyckats få mig att lyssna på så många som jag för några år sen avskydde utan att jag då ens gett dom en chans... Jag är glad för att du skickade dom till mig.
Ah, dude, spam or what? XP Fast jag orkar inte bry mig; jag saknar dig och du kommer inte förrän om en timme och tio minuter så jag får skriva en massa onödig skit.
and GRFFTTHHH it's ooooveeeer *cries* ah well. i'll move on. and you'll write another story about frerard and I'll move on xD no but really, this was a good story. the only bad thing was that Green Day wasn't as involved as I'd hoped...
ah well, you're writing is awezum and u know it :]
This was so cute. I'm so happy that they are happy. I was beginning to worry there for a few chapters... I figured they would never work it out. Like, it was getting so depressing! I'm excited that they are back to being cute and that they understand each other.
Oh Gerard and his hormones, perving on his baby brother. :D
I didn't realize this story was coming to an end so quickly! But it ended at a really good time. It didn't drag on like a bad teen movie. It was lovely.
Wow, I wasn't expecting it to end, but I really loved that ending! I'm so, so happy that everything worked out for them =D I'm truly going to miss this story. :arms:
As anti-climatic as it was, I honestly think it couldn't have ended in a better way. Any longer and I think you might have dragged it on for too long. As it happens, the ending was great! :D And the story in general. Loved it.
Love, I just really adore this story. It's well written, different and Cliché (Cliché, in a good way, of course). Plus, since you don't update very often (...) , it's even more fun to get an email notification thing, to see that you've updated.
But really, your writing is too good for your own good.
I've abandoned so many stories that I thought was good in the beginnings but turned out to be shit. I've stood by this story since you first sent it to me, and I'm glad I did.
Oh, and also- I think, for me, it would be the fact that Mikey and Gerard did something, rahter than the fact that they are brothers, strangely enough.
Loved the whole storyline
Bravo :D