Glades and Playgrounds - Comments

Wow Frank, that was wwaaaay too harsh. You don't even know if they actually did anything - you just know that Gerard is attracted to him, right? AND you're supposed to love him!

Great update, more SOON!

xoxox

Ooh, drama!

I love it.

Wow, I loved that chapter.

Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god.
NEW READER.
I'm so hooked, and I was soooo into this, and WHABAM.
The chapters just cut off.
Please please please write more.
Normally, I don't beg, but this story.. I'll beg.
xD
[Oh, btw, my names Sasha. HELLO ALL!]

I just read all this and...Holy crap!

I hope they can work it out!

Update soon!

o.0

i was not expecting that at all....nope, not at all....wow....i have no idea what to say to that...is frank ever going to talk to them again?

as always it was a very well done chapter!

Wow...Okay, so I read this story a long time ago but somehow, I completely lost the link and forgot the title which lead me to just unwillingly wipe this story from my memory. And now I have found it again and I'm so happy to have done so, although now I'm cursing inwardly at the fact that it has ended so abruptly. I've been reading it for the better part of the past few hours and to suddenly have to stop reading was disconcerting and disappointing.

I've subscribed, so I won't idiotically lose the story again; it's much too good to give up. I'm hopelessly hooked and will be eagerly awaiting for the next update. I'm just so glad at finding this again and quite shocked at this last chapter.

<3 Jenn

Sexual Innuendo.:

Explanation ?
I'm going to assume it's not what it sounds like.
Though I'd be fine if it is , heh.
But ... I'm still going to assume.
Awesomeness as always. <3

(Just a question , maybe I'm just dumb - Did you mean 'stiff' instead of 'stale' ? 'Cause stale is like bread ... Unless there's another meaning.)

... I meant 'stiff'. XP Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it. (:

Oh my giddy aunt... AAH!
Frank! Please talk to Gerard!

Holy...

Update soon, dammit!

xoxoxox

Explanation ?
I'm going to assume it's not what it sounds like.
Though I'd be fine if it is , heh.
But ... I'm still going to assume.
Awesomeness as always. <3

(Just a question , maybe I'm just dumb - Did you mean 'stiff' instead of 'stale' ? 'Cause stale is like bread ... Unless there's another meaning.)

Holy shit!
I was not expecting that!

*grins*
Yay for unexpected waycest! :mrgreen:
But poor Frankie. :[

Oh dear. Stupid brothers. XD
Awww, Frank must feel terrible. More soon please!

Bluetooth.:

You know what, love?
You made it realistic. And I fucking love you for that.
I love you for many other reasons too...
ANYWAY. You deserves to know that it was really great.

Pff, jag hatar att skriva kommentarer till dig, för jag känner mig verkligen omöjligt ännu mer stalker-ish. XD Seriöst, ditt sex pwns. Hahah, jag älskar det, för det är så jeffla o-cliché.

You're so cute.

Jag kunde inte ha skrivit det utan din hjälp, baby, det vet du. :D:D <3
And hey "I wanna marry my stalker" has never been more true.

You know what, love?
You made it realistic. And I fucking love you for that.
I love you for many other reasons too...
ANYWAY. You deserves to know that it was really great.

Pff, jag hatar att skriva kommentarer till dig, för jag känner mig verkligen omöjligt ännu mer stalker-ish. XD Seriöst, ditt sex pwns. Hahah, jag älskar det, för det är så jeffla o-cliché.

The sex wasn't amazing but if you take into account it was Frank's first time, then that's bringing in reality. He wouldn't and seemingly didn't enjoy it completely.

The same goes for the rushed feeling.

I love this story ten times more now because of that. You didn't try and make the sex perfect the first time which people do. And you put in that anal sex hurts a little, which is entirely true but I've never thought it was put into words as well.

are you frickin kidding me, that wasn't crap at all, that was beautiful. it was so innocent, so moving, so emotional, so true. i'd give anything to write a scene like that, seriously, it was truly a beautiful moment between gerard and frank.

i rather liked that you portrayed their first time exactly like a first time, i'm pretty sure the pain isn't just going to vanish and bam the best orgasm of your life happens...that was truly an amazing chapter. very well done.

I think your sex was amazing..
it was totally different from any other sex ive read!
like, you made it real. Anal hurts. (well, im guessing it does... i dont have experience in the intimacy department) and being a teen, sex can sometimes be awkward and painful (again, im just guessing..)

But yeah... Everyone else makes first-times perfect.. Like, the character will hurt for, like, a minute, then all of a sudden it's utter bliss. They both manage to come at the same time... It's so lame.

Your sex was real...

(how awkward was THIS post, huh? I felt awkward just writing it...)
(But yeah.. Im friggin serious...)

Oh my god, I almost squealed when I had seen that this had been updated!!

Can I firstly say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for writing a fucking realistic sex scene!

And what you said about it being crappy.. I want to slap you for that. This seriously has to be one of the most realistic sex scenes I’ve read on here, well between two characters that are in love, anyway.

And there is one line in this that I absolutely loved. For some reason it just really struck me.

He brought his hand up to my face to stroke my cheek, and sure, it was cute, but it was more needed a little further down.

It was cute. I freaking loved that.

I loved this chapter. Amazingly well written, and them finally getting down to it, completely surpassing my expectations. :)

Really cannot wait to see where you take this next.

P.S I honestly think that this chapter is going to go down as one of my favourite scenes from you, and possibly ever.

That was fucking seriously the best sex scene I have ever read.

I love how realistic it was, and how un-perfect it was. That is just how I'd imagine real life to be... not perfect, but perfect all the same. If you catch my drift.

Anyway, this is an amazing chapter. Please, please write some more, because your writing seriously inspires mine. It's so beautifully written, and I'm a sap for romantic sex. :D

You're forgiven, because I loved that chapter so much!

I loved how realistic it was - all the boysex I've ever read is always so perrrfect, and amazing all the time, but the way you made it so awkward, and not-perfect, made it perfect! If you know what I mean.. OK, I even confused myself :XD

Basically, amazing update. More soooon?

xoxoxoxooxx