Glades and Playgrounds - Comments

i think it was really awesome written...
and YAY DISTURBIA!!!!!!<3333333 (yes i love Shia!! :D )

I've never read a sex scene like that.
And I've read a lot of porn.
It was completely different. It wasn't perfect , like it always is.
It was quirky and adorable. I loved it.

that was the opposite of a crap sex scene. it was amazing. I wanted to cry and laugh at the same time. it was so sweet at the end. i loved it.

darling. i love you, obviously, seeing how i faithfully read almost everyone of your fics. so will you show some love and update pleaseeeee?

Update?

I wanna know what Frankie has planned for when they get home...

more soon!!!! please?

xoxoxox

yay update!!!and it was sooo sweeet!!awwwwww<333

that was a lovely update...such an adorable moment between gerard and frank! and yeah, i'd definitely take a cab than to have to sing mariah carey any day.

That's so sweet!
Poor Frankie... I can sympathise with him and rides.

awww that's so cute!!!!
love it love it can't wait for the update xox

Haha , awwh.
Frank and Gerard's relationship in this story is so real.
It actually reminds me of my boyfriend and I , to this strange degree.
Just the stupid arguments and retarted ways you forgive them.
It's cute.
I love this story so much , more soonish?

*squeels*....

MAKE THEM BANG

*snort*
haha!

I love this story so much... Its just so cute and they are so cute together! Gerard's character seems so real...u know?

well, of course you know...

<33

:crazy:

Another wonderful chapter full of happy moments, brotherliness, and hysterically funny dialogue. I know you keep saying this story is going somewhere, but I'd like to reiterate that as long as you write it so entertainingly, I don't care if it goes anywhere or not. :D

Except I want Gerard's confession. Not knowing is starting to piss the monkeys out of me.

And boysex. I want boysex eventually.

“What’s her name?” I heard Gerard ask and had no idea what he was talking about.

I love doing that to siblings. Sometimes, if you catch them off-guard enough, you can get them to tell you whatever it is before they realize they've done it. Not that, you know, I've done that or anything.

Gerard went silent, sighed and relaxed into the pillow.

He gives up more easily than I do. *giggle*

Without realizing that I had fallen asleep once again, I woke up for the second time that morning.

Mmmmm... I love lazy mornings when I can do that. *sigh*

I closed my eyes momentarily and felt so extremely content and relaxed with having Gerard so close and the sunlight hitting my back and the comforting silence in the house.

You write that so beautiful I can just imagine myself there!

“Stay in bed,” was my immediate answer and as punishment for not giving him an acceptable answer, he rolled on top of me.

Gerard has a thing about rolling on top of Frank and pinning him down in a non-sexual way, doesn't he? That would get annoying quickly.

“Motherfucker…” I whimpered, thrashing my head from side to side to avoid his mouth, “I don’t know! I’ll do anything you want if you’ll just eat a fuckin’ Tic-Tac!”

:lmfao

“Did you eat a fluffy little bunny for breakfast or what?” was Gerard’s reply to his brother’s cheerfulness and Mikey frowned for a second.

I so have to remember that one. I loathe people who are cheerful when I'm just waking up.

“Mom and dad left me in charge, and you’re not leaving this house until I know where you’re going,” Gerard said with a tone that could’ve just as easily been used by his mother.

Nice.

I liked Gerard when he was being serious and over-protective. It made him look so handsome.

Awwww! :cute:

Mikey let out a frustrated noise and stomped his foot in the floor, “Her name’s Gerard-is-a-fucking-asshole, alright?!”

“Pretty,” Gerard commented

I nearly PMSL reading this! Seriously. That is too hilarious. And the funniest part is that I can absolutely imagine that exact conversation occuring between me and one of my younger sisters.

“You’re quite a bitch,” I said calmly, taking another sip of my coffee. “If you ever try something like that on me, I’ll kick your ass.”

Ah, but you aren't his brother, Frankie.

*laughing hysterically* "Did you eat a fluffy bunny for breakfast?"

For some reason, that struck me as fucking hilarious. Dunno why. xD

im upset about the wait *pouts* i want updates now! oh well as long as you update as soon as you get back!

They haven't you know.. had sex yet have they? Thats sweet :):):):):)

Have fun in Stockholm!

update when you can :D

xoxoxox

Haha.
Most annoying brother ever.
I love how you write dialogue.
It's so real , and absolutely hillarious.

yaaaaay nice update!!!!!
and waiting is fine, this story is amazing!
love it love it xox

so okay we're gonna wait :) this story worths it!

Lucky! I heart the smashing pumpkins... they only got 2 stars in Kerrang magazine though! :cry:

awww I really liked that chapter :D

xoxoxox