This was absolutely amazing. I feel like I'm late to comment but honestly I had never been so interested in something I found off the internet. I just want to thank you, for creating something so lovely. I enjoyed it greatly. xx.
So I finally came back to this; Will and Sylvan. Finished chapter 15, titled fourteen. The beauty in the pain, eh? Sounds depressing as all heck, but a dark truth -rambling.
This story is very sad. Beautiful, but sad because of how Sylvan responds to what goes on around him... Loving this <3
"I knew I should feel happy, I knew I should be smiling, but all I could work up the energy for was to crouch down and press my palms flat against the ground, taking deep breaths. My hair hung in my eyes and the sawdust blurred as my eyes prickled, the weight of the scissors in my pocket making me want to cry. Because if he didn’t snuff out his own life, I was going to cut him in half."
It's so beautiful in such a wrong way. I love it =]
So, I've been wanting to read this story for a while and I finally started! -last night!!! Anyhoo, I know you're done with it, but I hope you don't mind me commenting it anyway xP I'm on chapter six, the one titles Five. Confusing-ness, but stilllllllll. It makes sense. And, it's an interesting world they're in.-Social status- Circus status, truly does matter. Drama will probably ensue.... Yesh, I'll continue reading this and Mouse xD
I just started reading your story 'Sleepyhead' and I don't believe there is another word fit for my reaction than 'Wow.' I can't say that I've ever read such a play on words, there is feeling and true character behind each chapter, and I'm itching for chapter 5 to come out already. It's so cool that your storyline doesn't fall in with the regular run of the mill stuff. I hope that you continue your writing, and that Mibba's pointless deletes won't discourage you. - Erica
Wow, this whole story was so messed up it was beautiful. It really did make me cry. I just loved it, it was so deep. & your writing style just made it perfect. I read all of it tonight. Your stories are just lovely! You're a great writer & I'm betting a good person. :) AWESOME. Man, no words can describe the raw emotion i felt while READING this!
wow, just wow. This was so beautifully done and I really loved it. 'awsome job' I would say, but that would do it an icrediable injustice. No words to describe how great it was
Omg! It really is over. I have honestly been both dreading this moment and anxious for it to finally arrive. I envy Will and Sylvan, because there is something so breathtakingly beautiful about those last few words. Not having the slightest idea where you going only knowing that; if its meant to be you'll get there.
that was such a beautiful ending. i'm sad to see this end, but it was a wonderful read and i'll probably re-read it again and again. you truly have talent.