I loved the last update. The way you describe things is beautiful you use original and creative methaphores. and I absolutly love the plot. You make his feelings so hearthbreaking realistic. anyway I love it I know that you want criticism or just feedback so I tried to find something negative. But I'm still searching :D love it hun
I think this is like my favorite chapter so far! But it leaves me slightly confused is Will still gonna go through with the whole hair cutting destroying Sylvan thing or did he change his mind?
I love this chapter for the same reasons as Dr. Giggles. awesome. anyway keep the very good work up. I do find it sad that the "other circus people" don't care abouth the feelings of sylvan. but I guess he's just a freak in their eyes anyway. very realistic. love the story keep updating
You may hate this chapter but I love it. The masochism Will experiences is a sort of beautiful curse. I think I am more in love with his pain than his personality. Sure, he's not supposed to be a good guy like Sylvan. But his personality is something so real that it's almost comforting. But the pain... The self-punishment he has is... Amazing. I crave it. I crave another chapter as well so HURRY UP! x3 Much love and cookies.
I love this. After such a long subscription, I've finally commented. Well, it was subscription, accidentally deleting it and subscription again but still. I honestly fell in love with Will and Sylvan and love how they fit together. It's beautiful. Keep up the awesome work, lovie. =3
I just stumbled on this story and hun it's amazing it's so original and intruging I love it. I'm suscribing you deserve so much more comments. I'm going to be a new faithfull commenter just thought I would let you know :cute: keep up the good work seriously I love this story
its probably my favorite @ the moment :D :D :D\
pleasepleaseplease update soooooon!! :)