Fishboy - Comments

This is quite possibly the best story on this website. I could see this on a bookshelf in barnes and noble. Keep up the amazing work!

Holy crap.
How do you manage to think up all these beautiful one liners?
Just some of the things Will says...
I don't think I've read such wonderfully beautiful prose in ages. Even in actual published books. It's awesome. Just awesome.

awesome story!! can't wait to read more. :)

I have to say, I fell in love with the story the moment I read the first chapter.
Your writing style is simply captivating as are your characters.
Will and Sylvan seem simply alive to me; like they exist in the world and you're telling their story.
The story has made me feel a vast amount of emotions--hate, love, sadness, empathy--as well as more.

All in all, the story is brilliant. (:
Keep up the amazing work. <3

stupid father of Will!
ugh!!!!!!! if only...........

To be honest, I never really saw myself reading this story.
I always saw it on the list of stories, and sure, it had ten stars. But anyone can get 100 subscribers. So I always overlooked your story.
But one day I was mad bored, and I thought hey, let's go check it out. And I'm glad I did.
You're a great writer, and this story is beautifully written.
Update soon :)

Honestly, this has to be one of my all time favorite stories.
Its beautifully written and I love it.
=)

this chapter is beautiful. as always. reading the last part, about them 'starting to live', i was actually grinning like a cheshire cat, aha. so good. <3

this chapter is beautiful. as always. reading the last part, about them 'starting to live', i was actually grinning like a cheshire cat, aha. so good. <3

<3 this story is stunning.

i love this story
it's so pretty that it makes me want to cry :)

The word lovely -oddly- fits this chapter so well

Aw thats probably the sweetest chapter yet
well done

i dont think i've commented in ages, although i have been reading. so again, this is really amazing. {:
looking forward to reading the next chapter, hopefully later on. ;D
xxx

The thing i love about this story is the main characters (whos name keeps escaping me sorry) psycological profile XD
nerdy i know but he intrigues me :P

it's amazing
just wow
update soon?

I absolutely love this story!
It's so original and unlike any other story (:
I love it!

Wow the description in the chapter was phenomanal! it was realy amazing, how you conveyed all that emotion, all that anger so well and proffesionally.
DOn't think about winding it up! The show must go on!!!!
Hope there isnt too long a wait for the next chapter
Good Job ^_^

I think I've definitely missed a lot in this....
But I'm all caught up and amazed =]

It's so gooooood!
update?