Holly - Comments

Horrifically beautiful, if that makes sense. One of the best stories I've ever read.

This is so incredible. The character development, the plot, the details, it's just.. amazing.
I cried so much over this, it's just.. a beautiful story and it's honestly one of the best I've ever read.

I have just cried for ages over the end , i wish it didnt end like this its not because he killed her but because he kinda set her free , it made me so emotional. Best story i have read

I cried so much at the end! D:

I like this. A lot.

Your flow and wording are both lovely and the idea is nice too. Good job!

P.S. the layout's gorgeous.

Ohmygod! I've read this story in a week and today I've read the last 5chapters and with the last 3 I cried and with the last 2 I was so in shock, I am stil crying!

read this story in 2 days b/c of brookiekillskittens [user above me]

I totally agree with her from the frist word till the last one.

I cried at the last chapter, I cried for Tom & for Holly because she was being choked by someone she believed could never hurt her but only love her...my gosh, im tearing up just by writing this :'(

I feel so bad for everyone, i've never read such a fantastic story in MY LIFE.

Jesus Christ.
This is the best story I've ever read in my life, and a fanfiction at that. Honestly, this just blew me away. I couldn't stop reading it, no matter how sick and messed up Tom was in the end, I still felt this undeniable pity for him. I mean, he loved her, but good God. He was fucked in the head. More so than Oliver, even. You have such a beautiful way with words and description, nothing was ever overused, I could always picture scenes perfectly.

You are one talented girl.

I like it. Very well-written, too. :)

Ohmygod.
Ohmygod.
This is..
Just..
This is is beautiful. <3
I'm glad I found this by accident.

I read the whole thing in one sitting now, it took me almost five hours but I was totally worth it. When I have more time I'm itching to read the other one that to me, it seems to follow this story? It still has Tom in it so *pounces on it next time* For now I'm going to bed, but keep up the amazing work darling, it will pay off big time if you get it published!

Wow I just finished reading the first chapter and you really have me sucked in to reading it until the end! You should strongly consider getting this published!

My God I loved it
I cried too much

Hi I just wanted to tell you how excellent this story is.
I just randomly found this story and read it from start to finish.
By chapter 27 I was in tears.
I must say this is now one of my top favorite stories on here.

I absolutely loved this story but please tell me there's an alternate ending.

fucking wow.
incoherent right here.
jesus, i'm shivering.

I just read this whole thing, start to finish in one go.
Bravo for creating something so unique, beautiful, tragic and thought-provoking.
I don't think I'll ever forget this.

You are such a good writer!
I was crying reading the end of this
It is brillaint
I love the way you describe everything and how beautiful you make the characters seem.
I love the ending it is something you do not expect .
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story
xx

I don't understand how one story can be so fucking incredible. It's powerful, disturbing, and frighteningly realistic. This story has evoked such emotion in me, I feel as if it could be a movie or something. Wow.

amazing.... absolutely amazing, I've just spent the last three hours reading this from start to finish...I'm speechless... seriously, amazing work!