woohoo! i already know what happens next!!! but im subscribed anyways!!!!! so, since the part of ryan's partner/mate/thing is already taken i think i shoudl still be incorporatd into the story somehow... like...cause i AM your best friend... or i was last time i checked anyway... 0.o well anyways... i love you and your story... =]
Panic Pun.. hahaha! Just one thing, make sure you check your grammar before, There were a few places in there that were lacking apostrophes. I think you said Mans instead of Man's. I don't know if spell check corrects that. Anyways, Update soon, and I can't wait for more!
stop putting your self down :P