Speechless. - Comments

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HOLY CANNOLI.
I'm glad that you've decided to finish this story :)
I've been wondering what was going to happen between Amelia and John.

I would love for this story to get updated.

love it!!
are you planning on writing more??
I really want to know what happened next!!
:D

are you going to continue writing this story?

i absolutely love this story!!!

just read all the chapters! cant wait till the next update!

Update love the story

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Whoa. I wasn't expecting that, but I really can see Candy doing that...
But, now I want to know who the father is.

Ditto.

Whoa. I wasn't expecting that, but I really can see Candy doing that...
But, now I want to know who the father is.

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Oh wow, I had always dismissed the possibility of Mickey being Mia's kid because Candy is supposed to be the mother and well I really can't wait from the next one because I'm dying to not be confused anymore haha

Ditto! It crossed my mind maybe once, but I always thought Candy was the mother. You may want to reread the chapter for spelling mistakes, but it was a great chapter.

Oh wow, I had always dismissed the possibility of Mickey being Mia's kid because Candy is supposed to be the mother and well I really can't wait from the next one because I'm dying to not be confused anymore haha

I like this story, it has a unique and unusual idea! I love it, you should update soon
:D

I'm new to reading this story, but I love it<3
This is the best story ever<33

I like this update a lot. I'm excited for a new one =)

This is really good. I've never read a story on here as intricate and raw as this one. You don't hold back and yet you don't let loose too much. Please update.

That was an amazing chapter, it was pretty amazing how she got the girl out of there while still managing to get Viper at knifepoint. I am still a little confused as to what he is saying yes to. That's the only thing. Great chapter though!

I would say yes to taking a creative writing class, they help deepen your writing skills and everyone is pretty much as self-conscious and nervous as you are. As the Nike slogan goes "Just do it."

I love Speechless, I think it is intense and mysterious. I also think you should do a creative writing class. I've have before and they're great. You're good and as far as being self concious about your writing...for one, you don't need to be and two, everyone else in the class will be too. Everyone in the same boat, so go for it!

HOLY CANNOLI!
That chapter was really intense. I can't believe that Amelia was able to get Mickey out of there in addition to getting to Viper at knifepoint.

Although I'm not sure what you have in store for Mickey and Mia, as well as everyone else, I can't wait to read more.

the answer is yes? yes to what? did i miss something or is it going to be in the next chapter haha
i'm sorry i'm just slightly confused.

as far as taking the creative writing class i say you'll never know 'til you try it. I mean as far as potential goes, you have it, you write really well.
so i think if you want to do it, you should.