Speechless. - Comments

:D This. Is. Uhmaaazing.

woahWOAH!
Matt followed her back to Maryland?
My mind has effectively been boggled.

On another note, it's horrible that Candice is hanging around that douchebag Viper. I'm glad that Amelia stood up to her, but it doesn't change the fact that Mickey is in danger.

Great job with this chapter.

I'm sorry for being a silent reader! I've just broken this streak, because that last chapter got to me. It snuck right down into my heart and made me feel every emotion I could possibly feel. Update Speechless, for me? (:

Another Speechless, please!
Amazing chapter, can't wait for the next,
and Happy Birthday. :)

even Rian and Zack would shake their heads in disappoint.

Disappointment, perhaps?

Portraits of those they’d loss, faces of the ones Amelia could never truly get out of her head.

I think you meant to use lost here.

Cougar had numbly, calmly explained to her that she was suffering from Vocal Cord Paralysis at the hands of Viper.

Vocal cord paralyisis doesn't need to be capitalized, I don't think. I could be wrong.

Happy birthday! I hope it's a good one, =) That was an amazing chapter, so many twists and turns. One other con. crit. note I'll make is when you're writing dialogue, if you want it to sound like the character's stressing their words or pauses, commas work brilliantly. I just wonder how Matt found her, heh. But I love the flashback scenes, they are just brilliant. I can't wait for the nect chapter, =)

another speechless haha i mean you can't just leave it there now.
oh and happy birthday :)

this chapter was just genius and i'm starting to figure some things out, i have a feeling anything i'm not sure about is going to be cleared up in the next few updates. i'm really excited, i had been waiting for this.

Completely and utterly brilliant.

Wow... what is Matt going to say?! I can't believe you ended it like that!!! I can't wait for more.

i love this story
it's really good =)

I really like the dynamic between John and Amelia. Although there's a lot of tension between them, it's obvious that John really wants to help her. He's frustrated that she's not letting him in, and she's frustrated that he's starting to break down her walls. It's all quite an interesting process.

If Amelia's not going home to visit her parents, I'm really curious to find out why she's going back. In addition to that, I'm wondering what will happen to the progress she's made since joining the Warped when she goes back home.

Wow... that was intense. I love how you can write dialogue and someone showing their emotions without speaking, you know? It's really amazing. Now, you do have a number of typos in this chapter (I forget the number, sorry) with regards to coding, homonyms and plurals (there were only a few), but other than those it was a great chapter. I still can't help but think it has something to do with substance abuse. I'm probably wrong and you're going to blow my mind with whatever it is. But great update as per usual, =)

I loved the update! I cant wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapter! more soon please!

That was such a heart-wrenching chapter. I loved the flashback scenes, and I'm going to agree with the person above me and guess that drugs plays a role in this. This story has an interesting concept, and I can't wait until we actually do find out what happened. More soon?

this is sooo good.

so i'm going to take a guess here and say drug dealing?
that's what i had originally thought, hence the go ask alice vibe, but gosh i hope that's not the case because that's dreadfully sad. but if that is the case then it'll make for an amazing plot line (well that and you writing it ;D)

i do hope they'll find her, mickey i mean.

so this for real made me cry. i love how much emotion this story has. the conflict is amazing. thanks for updating. i really can't wait for the next one.

awwww i loved it! this is sooo good =]

I loved the update! I cant wait to get more clues to her past! More soon please!

I just started reading this today, and it's nothing short of amazing.
The way you write makes everything feel like it's jumping off my computer screen.
For the last few chapters, you had me on the verge of tears, and I honestly can't remember the last time a story did that to me.

I'm subscribed and hoping that you continue writing.

:) I finally read it.
Yay for the flashbacking. More please.

I know Matt probably things our parents lied but they didn’t.

I think you meant 'thinks,' and I really thought you did a nice job with the transitioning into a flashback sequence. I quite enjoyed it. I am really anxious to know what happened out there, but you are pacing this actually really well. Amazing chapter and I cannot wait for the next, =)