I really, really, REALLY love this so far. All the characters are so good--Clark and Taylor and Alex and even Jack are so fleshed out and believable already. I like Clark especially, how she seems to be constantly hiding behind jokes and a tough exterior. And I personally can really identify with the whole "young and lost" spiel in chapter 3.
I'm gonna miss this story while you're gone. I hope you come back soon. In the meantime, just know that you hating your writing is completely absurd. Your writing constantly amazes me. Really. =]
Wow oh wow, this so has the potential to become my new favorite story. Don't ever stop. p.s. Well-written, readable fan fic? YEA!!! It's been too long...
I like this even more than I thought I would. And that's saying A LOT. It's well thought out and well written and all the characters are amazing already, and--gahhh! I'm just so excited for this story!
My favorite line so far, hands down: "He brags about the girls he’s had, but he secretly, late at night, misses all of them." I love that. So much. <3
So thank you for writing a GOOD fanfic. They're hard to come by these days.
Oh, and I love her tattoo, by the way. I'm not a tattoo person, but I would actually get that one. It just seems so pretty and unique and meaningful. =]
Ahhhhh! I'm the first to comment! That's awesome! And this story is awesome! Seriously, I can see why you like Clark so much, 'cause I'm like already in love with her, (you know in a non-gay-creepy way).
I think that this story is going to be brilliant, and I lurve it. And I love you. :D
I'm gonna miss this story while you're gone. I hope you come back soon. In the meantime, just know that you hating your writing is completely absurd. Your writing constantly amazes me. Really. =]