The Young and Lost Club - Comments

  • semisweet

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    I really, really, REALLY love this so far. All the characters are so good--Clark and Taylor and Alex and even Jack are so fleshed out and believable already. I like Clark especially, how she seems to be constantly hiding behind jokes and a tough exterior. And I personally can really identify with the whole "young and lost" spiel in chapter 3.

    I'm gonna miss this story while you're gone. I hope you come back soon. In the meantime, just know that you hating your writing is completely absurd. Your writing constantly amazes me. Really. =]
    August 16th, 2009 at 03:02am
  • inyourbackyard

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    Wow oh wow, this so has the potential to become my new favorite story. Don't ever stop.
    p.s. Well-written, readable fan fic? YEA!!! It's been too long...
    August 9th, 2009 at 12:26am
  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    Haha, Jack's character is adorable w/the whole apologizing thing.

    I like Clark's character, too, even though I feel like I shouldnt : )
    August 7th, 2009 at 03:21am
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    I really liked that last chapter. I love her bitchiness, or at least how she used to be, and it makes me want to know what went wrong with Brendon.

    *Subscribing,* update soon!
    August 6th, 2009 at 03:11am
  • semisweet

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    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

    I like this even more than I thought I would. And that's saying A LOT. It's well thought out and well written and all the characters are amazing already, and--gahhh! I'm just so excited for this story!

    My favorite line so far, hands down: "He brags about the girls he’s had, but he secretly, late at night, misses all of them." I love that. So much. <3

    So thank you for writing a GOOD fanfic. They're hard to come by these days.

    Oh, and I love her tattoo, by the way. I'm not a tattoo person, but I would actually get that one. It just seems so pretty and unique and meaningful. =]
    August 5th, 2009 at 05:46am
  • mrcuteshorts

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    Eeek!!! A good Brendon Urie fic!!! Give me a moment to freak out about this...

    ...

    Okay, now I can write about how good I think this is.

    I think Clark is cool. I honestly think she's a cool chick you'd like to be friends with. And I really like where this is going.

    Like, really.
    August 5th, 2009 at 05:15am
  • lazydancer

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    Ahhhhh! I'm the first to comment!
    That's awesome! And this story is awesome!
    Seriously, I can see why you like Clark so much, 'cause I'm like already in love with her, (you know in a non-gay-creepy way).

    I think that this story is going to be brilliant, and I lurve it.
    And I love you.

    :D
    August 5th, 2009 at 04:22am