The Young and Lost Club - Comments

You asked in the authors note: I just finished chapter 33 and I felt like forgiving Brendon after he showed up at her apartment.

Because I'm stupid and a romantic like that.

Hate to be the bearer of bad news at 2:30 AM but,
you still have some "Las Vegas in Arizona" mistakes.
I don't know. Before chapter 24

I'm on chapter 10. I fucking love you.

Hi. Just wanted to say that I've finally finished reading this and that is is incredible. I'm glad she forgave him. :)

one of the best stories ive ever read.

I agree with the person above me. I wish you could get an award. This is one of the best stories I've read, if not THEE best. I'm so sad to see it end, but, I loved it so much <3

i wish i could give you an award for having the best story i've ever read.
it made me laugh, cry, smile, mad, everything. i really felt like clark in the story.
you truly have a gift. i know i say this like every time i comment but it's true.
i'm glad i found this story. :)

that was the most wonderful story i've read about brendon urie. :]
i'm sad to see it go, but it was one hell of a story to tell. :D
keep writing.
-Maxxie

I'm just gonna sit here and sob everywhere that was so beautiful and she deserves Brendon and he does have beautiful lips and I want to get him wasted something.
I forgot if I was team Alex or Brendon which means I'm not sure if I'm supposed to be jumping up and down in victory or raging everywhere and going to find some tequila to drink away my sorrows... my bad.
I forgave Brendon and I'm glad she did. And she grew up in the process as did he. I mean, don't get me wrong, sex with Alex anytime I wanted would be just...grand, but she's better with that beautiful creature Brendon.
Honestly, this was the best roller coaster I've ever been on. Clarke was, god, such a great character. She was diverse and layered. There was more then just "I'm sad because my boyfriend cheated on me" she had so many reasons. She gave him everything, told him everything, trusted him with everything, and he ruined that. But in the end, she deserved to have him because that's what made her happy. Plus, a happy... why am I explaining this to you when you know all this... i don't know.
I loved this story. I really did and I'm gonna miss it dearly. You are such an incredible writer and I'm envious of how you write emotion and interactions. I really cannot wait for the next story, I'll be one of the first to subscribe.
I slacked on comments, I know. I read every update at least twice but I suck and didn't comment. I am soooooo sorry.
BE RIGHT BACK SENDING YOU HUGS AND KISSES FOR INCLUDING BOTH IAN AND DALLON THEY ARE SUCH SWEET LITTLE ANGELS I WANT THEM IN MY LIFE.

I am really going to miss this story.
The ending did not dispoint me. I will def. be readin the sequel with Alex.

OH MY GOD I CAN'T HANDLE THIS.
NUUUUUUUUU.
God, when I was reading this, you don't know how many nights it kept me up past three. I started near the middle-end so… it seems like this all just happened so quickly. This is honestly one of my favorite stories on here. The way it's written… so real, and I love the past/present alternations. It's just. Gah. I can't even.
I'm so glad you finished this, cause if you hadn't I would've shot myself. I wouldn't have been able to handle this all being unfinished. Brendon is just so great in this, and Clarke, and… I want to write something like this someday.

Beautiful job. I'm looking foreword to whatever you write next, give me a heads-up when it's posted? (:

love the update :D

ahhh can't believe I missed the last couple updates...
I loved it all.
Can't wait for the epilogue!!

I`m so glad they`re together. I was convinced you`d make Clark run off again, and then I`d cry. Forever.

i was literally just thinking, when is the next chapter gonna be put out?!

i am sooo surprised by this honestly...!! different ending from what i expected!! but i really like it. i like that she thought things through and has decided to give him another chance.
i really really reallyyy enjoyed this story and can't wait to even read the epilogue! ;]

love the update :D

This story is amayzing. The characters are so amazingly real at I almost feel like I'm reading a biography. You are a great author, I really love you stuff. Please keep writing as long as you can. BTW the new update is so crazy awesome. Thank you so much for the new chaper. You're awesome!

soooo, I just wanted to let you know that you're a perfect human being and so amazing and omg I just love you. only you could make me fall in love with brendon, feel absolutely betrayed by him, and slowly get me to forgive the sonofabitch.... god, they're just so perfect though. GOD

please just keep writing forever and ever. I loved clark SO SO SO SO MUCH. I'm so sad that it's ending!

ps. has taylor really never read this? that needs to happen. you're kind of amazing
pps. I'm so sad tinychat failed and you didn't see my initial OMFG OMFG SOPHIE I LOVE YOU reaction... I was freaking out :D

AWWWW :) that was so sweet! I almost teared up! I love this story so much. I'm really really glad you updated. Can't wait for the next and last part.

This was such an amazing story and this chapter made me so happy for them! Still, it makes me so sad for Alex, I can't wait for the sequel.