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  • Rapture Love

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    I really like your story, hope you continue it :)
    March 5th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    That was actually a really sweet chapter. I mean, sure it's interesting the way that it's written, but it is a great testament to time and how relationships evolve through it. They will always be great friends, and I love that they still think about each other that way because it seems far more realistic than him saying that he doesn't. It seems very human. :)
    And yes, she's terribly silly. She won't get over him, and he's obviously not getting over her, no matter how hard he tries. C'mon Michael. Swallow your pride and at least go back to let the woman talk. You know you want her. :P
    March 5th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • Brianna_Breakdown_

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    You're a goddess. lol jk jk but This is amazing and I'm ready for a new sexy character
    March 4th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • Post-It

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    Absolutely loved it!
    Still feel sorry for Kayla though...
    But heeeey, a new sexy character! That's exciting :)
    March 4th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    Loved the update and the insight into Sam and Kayla's relationship :D And I'm intrigued about this new sexy character you're bringing in... :P

    xx Thanks for the update!
    March 4th, 2011 at 09:23pm
  • MirrorRain

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    Inspiring comment. :)
    March 4th, 2011 at 09:22am
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    I like the dress
    March 4th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • Brianna_Breakdown_

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    love it! more more more! I like that she's moving out, definitely. And I also wonder where her and sam's history is going... and I'm excited for more! <3
    March 3rd, 2011 at 09:17pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    I love that she's moving out, but I really think that she needs people. Sam is going to be terribly worried about her. I hope that he'll be okay. Also, not that I don't love the interaction between the two of them, but where exactly are you going with their history?
    March 3rd, 2011 at 06:46pm
  • bernardbananahammock

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    i hope you update tomorrow! are they going to see each other again through an event where they both happen to attend or are they going to try and find each other????! i cant wait! :D
    March 3rd, 2011 at 06:37pm
  • Post-It

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    Ohh I like the dress, it's pretty.
    Great update, it was fun... kinda lol.
    Kayla is moving out, woow! Her apartment sounds amazing.
    I love how you casually mention her heart ache in her normal way of thinking.
    Can't wait for more :D
    March 3rd, 2011 at 06:00pm
  • Samynator

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    OMG, keep writing more about the time she met Sam. What happened???? I love it :)
    March 1st, 2011 at 09:44pm
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    And for Chapter 41!
    I love it! The fact that they both lied makes it even more interesting, because if you think about it neither of them really know each other properly do they? I duno why I think that's good but I do!
    I just hope one of them takes charge and sorts it out. Yepppp :D

    And I forgot to add before I can't wait to hear more about the whole How I Met Sam Sincai business.
    <3
    March 1st, 2011 at 06:27pm
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    For Chapter 40!
    Still laughing cos the flirting with Sam and Kayla was so good! I know people just like Sam! Made me laugh a lot. :)
    I love how borderline arrogant Kayla is, she rocks!
    March 1st, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    I really don't understand why he's being so stubborn. That just doesn't make sense to me. He obviously loves her, and wants to know more about her, why doesn't he at least make the effort to find something out instead of making progress and then immediately jumping back to square one. He loves her, it's stupid to hold himself back from it. And he lied far more than she did. He actually went through the trouble of lying to her when she just didn't tell him some things. That doesn't make sense to me.

    Oh well... It was lovely :)
    March 1st, 2011 at 04:06am
  • horserideraja

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    heheheh hes bipolar. how bout you update for the people who love you and ur wirting (LIKE ME) cause ya knooooww i enjoy this.
    March 1st, 2011 at 01:28am
  • Brianna_Breakdown_

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    Amazing!!!! I love it!!!!
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:51pm
  • dreamgirl13

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    I love this story soo much! This story isn't over right????
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:44pm
  • cac392

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    This is just depressing,but so good at the same time! Is it too ridiculous to hope that they get back together? I mean, spending eternity without your soulmate? Doesn't exactly sound like a blast to me. I feel as miserable as they do. Can't wait to see how this turns out!
    February 28th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • OliveRein

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    this is sadd, i really want things to get better for the both of them....
    February 28th, 2011 at 08:42pm