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  • silvermoonshadow27

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    So do we get more for Him?
    February 28th, 2011 at 08:41pm
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    Michael is from Estonia(me too) - that's so cool ! :D
    Great story!!
    February 27th, 2011 at 04:03pm
  • OliveRein

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    this put me to tears :(
    February 24th, 2011 at 02:54am
  • horserideraja

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    EAGER TO GET IT DONE MY BUTT. after that chapter i expect MANY more. i just want to hit both of them in the back of the heat for being such idiots. give me mooooreeee to read damn it! <33
    February 23rd, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • Post-It

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    Gah!
    That ending... just the last few paragraphs, absolutely perfect! And so sad, it brought a wee tear to my eye. :(
    I am convinced Michael will come back though, or one of them will forget the stubbornness of their nature and they will be together again. But then... aww I duno! Haha.
    I love it!
    LOVE IT!
    <3
    February 23rd, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    I just read all you've written within an hour or so... i couldn't stop reading. Love it very, very much :D
    I'd love it if you made a whole series with different characters and their love stories- like how you're doing Shane's as well as hers :) <3
    xx
    February 23rd, 2011 at 07:19pm
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    And so we just have to wait for more.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • MirrorRain

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    So that whole 'I'll never leave her again' thing was a load of BS? A-hole.
    February 22nd, 2011 at 11:38am
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    D: I just read all of it!!!
    February 22nd, 2011 at 07:44am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    well now that was awful. Stupid Michael, swallow your damn pride and open your eyes for a second. I kinda want to see him break down on the plane and cause a scene only to come back and find that Kayla isn't there. He'd deserve it.
    okay... my rant is over. I really love how she just kinda stood to the side though. She didn't do anything wrong. and it was his decision to make no matter how much it killed her to make it.
    February 21st, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • OliveRein

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    finaly, an update! Michael should shut his mouth and listen to what kayla has to say!
    February 21st, 2011 at 05:43pm
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    Jeeeeeeeeez!
    That was pretty awesome, though I think Michael will regret freaking out as badly as he did.
    I still loved it though!
    And now nearly everything is out in the open, I wonder if Michael will make Kayla fix things between Shane and Aiden? Gah, I am excited for more! :D
    Their bond will bring them back together...

    I think the dialog was great! Maybe a wee bit more description about Michaels actions might have made it a tiny bit better. But I don't think it will matter that much anyway, because it's still a brilliant chapter! Drama... I love it!
    February 21st, 2011 at 02:39pm
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    add an it beteew but and is on the post befor this.
    February 21st, 2011 at 10:31am
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    but is about time that she told him, oh and is he going to get on the airplane or are we going to have to read a chapter on how they make up in the airport. I vote that he gets on the plane and a little bit of time goes buy befor he craws back to her, maybe a month or two as a min and a max of a year or two.
    February 21st, 2011 at 10:30am
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    When he calms down he is going to be the one crawing back. can not wait for more.
    February 21st, 2011 at 10:26am
  • Brianna_Breakdown_

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    I must say it wasn't my favorite chapter either.
    But I did like it.
    Update soon!!!
    <3
    January 20th, 2011 at 04:18am
  • Post-It

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    I don't know why you don't like this chapter, I do!
    You have finally dropped some clues about the whole vampire business!
    I love it!
    I hope there is more soon. :D
    <3
    January 19th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • OliveRein

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    i agree with hatsu-kouen2143. thanks for the updat, please continue it !
    January 19th, 2011 at 12:10am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    Kayla Kayla Kayla, giving things away :D
    but it's seriously about time that she up and told him.. poor thing is so clueless.
    January 18th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • isisjonas

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    its really good:D and funny i love all the characters:) keep writing!!
    December 28th, 2010 at 07:12am
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