Framing The Famous - Comments

haha, that was good!! awkward date!! nothing like those! :D

Poor Tommy's unrequited love - every story needs an unfortunate figure of fun and he fits the bill perfectly!

I really like this story - keep it up (:

Loved it!

Finally Brian realizes it...really....duh Bri...come on...Its all that Gel its getting to his head. Maybe it has something turning him into a girl. Come on he literally had a titty attack on stage storming off! Oh how i love Brianna...

More!

Awe Tommy is so cute and I love the turn of events with Brian's feelings.

Ooooooo.. big bad Synyster Gates has a crush on Charlie! AHA! I sooo knew it. XD I'm awesome like that. lol. Amazing update! Oh dear Brian, if only you knew how happy I am right now with your jealousy. Bwahaha. XD
Loved. <3
P.S. The Tommy-Charlie-Brian is so cute, it reminded me of Severus-Lily-James. See how mad I've become? I see Harry Potter in everything! lol. XD

haha, i loved the part on stage, johnny and zacky like getting all excited and gossiping on stage, brian getting angry and matt glaring at them while singing.. that made me laugh!! cant wait for the next one!! :D

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haha. I love how Zacky made Brian blush, and that Tommy made Brian jealous! I am just happy he realized how much he really likes her.

...and I feel bad for Charlie with the whole Tommy thing. There is a fine line between leading him on and breaking his heart. I hope she can find a way to do neither.

I have a feeling that something BIG is coming soon...

Can't wait to read more. :mrgreen:

grrrrr.. I am so pissed at Syn right now!
How can he kiss her then fuck a whore in the next second? It's like Dark fucking Magic! I am now going to quote Killer.kill her... "It's all Brian's fault!"
*incendios Brian's hair*
And he won't be getting it back until he stops being a jackass to Charlie. *evil laughter*
Charlie rules! <3
Loved the update. <3

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:shock: wow. totally did not see that kiss fest coming...I thought that it would end up being a day dream or something but it really happened.

...and Charlie's mom is a witch with a capital B. Charlie needs to sever all ties asap.

...and Brian is making me angry. he takes one step forward (at the zoo) to take two steps back (with Cherry). why Brian? why?

Great update! Can't wait to read more! :coffee:

couldn't agree more
update soon plz :]

:shock: wow. totally did not see that kiss fest coming...I thought that it would end up being a day dream or something but it really happened.

...and Charlie's mom is a witch with a capital B. Charlie needs to sever all ties asap.

...and Brian is making me angry. he takes one step forward (at the zoo) to take two steps back (with Cherry). why Brian? why?

Great update! Can't wait to read more! :coffee:

i liked it.. the whole one extreme of emotions to the other.. than back again!! lol..

well written!! :D

this story suck, just kidding!

I really like this story. It's really well written and you seem to be keeping with the plot of the story. Your characters are well rounded and your chapters are long enough that pple are able to read something and still enjoy it without it feeling too rushed. I can't wait to read what you have next for this story. keep up the good work.

To: my favorite author.

oh my dear god its about time they got it the hell on!! ...but why did it have to end so soon?!?! ...i almost cried...so. brian is still an ass but i love how he pinned charlie against the wall and told her that he doesnt have sex with unwilling participants. I dont know why but I could just really see him saying and doing that. I love how we learn a little more about charlie and I love how this story is so awesome. seriously. I come home from school and check my email everyday just for an update notification.

lets see what else...oh yeah! okay so I thought it would have been the funniest most ackward and humiliating thing ever if (while having sex with cherry) brian moaned charlies name really loud unintentionally. lol. and then everyone on the bus looks at charlie and shes like ummm.... haha.

So...god this is long. im sorry. im really not trying to be really annoying and bother you with my bible lengthed comments but I just wanted to say thanks for the update and I hope there are more soon!! ...as well as strawberry and creme frappachinos:) ...and red skittles:)

From: your favorite reader:)

oh shit they kisses!!!!!! O.O FINALLY!!!

....one problem....

He went to go pop some Cherry afterwards.

Oh and then her mother. Wow...and whats sad is there are mothers like that. Poor Charlie got one too. It was horrible what she said. Though it was horrible she could have rephrased it and possibly made it better. I mean sure she's worried but she sounds like a bitch. Look at the movie Because I said so. She wanted her daughter married to be happy...not be ause she thinks she can't survive alone and be poor because she basically has no skill to do and be successful at.

Any way this is from my IPod so any mistakes I'm sorry!

More soon!

Oh my oh my oh my oh my.
I LOVED the update!!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!

YAY nice Brian! Oh he is so falling .... slowly. :D
I so can't wait for his reaction to when he realizes he is.
And the bickering! God, I love that. Especially when they didn't realize Charlie and Leana were already awake. XD
Loved. <3
Great update. And don't worry, you're brilliant - you can please us in a snap - hell you did just by posting this awesome story of yours. And I'll wait if ever you get delayed, swear. But about school, I know right? School just comes and bites us in the ass when we're in our game so good it's just - grrrr. lol. Good luck with that - when it starts. :]

I'm glad that the old Brian is slowly and surely coming back!

Charlie is such a good person to help Brian after being such an ass to her.

Can't wait to read more! :mrgreen:

ok so i officially made this my fvorite story on mibba. and you are my favorite writer!! i love your writing and completely envy it at the same time. it takes me forever to come up with shit and for you it just seems so...effortless. i find it hard when writing to manage my time because i wanna write everything that happens to a character but if i do that and try to be descriptive i get 4 rambling chapters about the first day of school... a true story might i add. I would now like to present you with the best writer award *gives trophy...and cookies!!* haha

now about the story- oh my god! brians not such an ass and my previous comments still stand about the elevator and stuff but yeah...bri's adorable. I love how with this story its like you start out in complete darkness but one by one someone keeps turning lights on so we keep getting more information. I feel that bri and charlie can only really be together when all the lights are on... so... more lights please?!? lol ...and i dont know why but when i read this story it gives me the feeling that something bad is gonna happen at the end...i sure as hell hope im wrong:(

so ive said quite enough now. thanks for the chapters and keep em coming!!

p.s. im sorry about school:( i started 2 weeks ago and am now finding it very diffacult to talk to all of my mibba friends:(

I just love your story; it's so fresh.
Can't wait for the next one. :)