Fragmented. - Comments

Aww poor Joey and Jakob and Adie. This is the best story in this trilogy fo'sure! I have no idea whats going to happen now though. Is she going to divorce Tom or Billie? Dum dum duuum!

:DD
yaaaaaaaay.
Joey and Jakob are adorable.
And..and..and I loved it.:)

This is getting so good! I love it =)

I haven't commented in a while, I know, shame on me. But I got to say that this last chapter was pretty awesome. I love cliffhangers, and I hate them x]

Ahhh. Great cliff hanger, even though I might go insane with curiosity now. Oooh well(:

...I hope I didn't comprehend that wrong. D: Fuck, I think I did.

Still a shocker! x)

Oh my god, that was the most shocking thing I've ever read! I was thinking the whole Tom thing was a little too random, but I should have known you're smarter than that. xD You had me deceived into thinking he was a different character! lol!

Wow. I'm still like..."o_o." Nothing like an awesome cliffhanger to shove life out of the way for awhile. Nice work, keep it up!

omfg this is the best cliffhanger you have ever fucking done! I'm speechless, what in the hell?

Ahh, yay:) they were happy. In a sad sort of way.

Oh Adie :( I feel so bad for her now and Billie too.

Gosh, I want them to get back together. And I am still very intrigued about Christian and Gloria :D

Love it :)

woo go christian and gloria!! haha.

Poor Billie though :( I feel so bad for the guy. Can't him and Adie work it out? They have done before...can't wait to read the next part. I love this story :D

Do your homework!!!

Haha just kidding....

I feel sorry for Billie...and i can't really think of anything else to say. I'm not really good at the whole writing words down thing.

:( aww. I wasn't expecting that!

I love how you still find the time to write this amazing story:) I'm just a silly little sophomore in high school and I feel like I don't even have time to sleep. So go you:)

omg fuck I wasn't expecting that :(

So excited for an update! This chapter made me super sad but wow, it was great =)

Please keep updating! You're doing a great job :)

I love your last two chapters! Chapter 13 made me teary eyed towards the end, and it didn't help that I had Good Riddance on either.

Well done! Hope you update soon and have fun at the University. ^_^

i care! haha i've been waiting for an update =)

this one made me sad. But in a good way. (if that makes any sense...)

I love how this story is like waaay different than all the other Billie and Adie stories. Makes it unique:)

this one made me sad. But in a good way. (if that makes any sense...)

I love how this story is like waaay different than all the other Billie and Adie stories. Makes it unique:)