Fragmented. - Comments

oof. I was not expecting that =/

Gaaah!

Oh shit....
:omfg:

sooooooo good =)

:O...!!!!!?!
oh DANG.

I'm going to refrain from spazzing for the time being. And 'patiently' await a new update:)

All I have to say about this chapter is...

=O OH MY FUCKING GOD HOLY SHIT.

Can't wait for the next update.

Aww they are so cute <3

Oh, God. I'm starting to worry about poor Billie Joe :( It's pretty cool to read a story about someone falling OUT of love for him, people always seem to assume that life for BJ and Adrienne must be all sunshine and roses because he's BILLIE JOE, MAN but obviously, that can't be true all of the time and this is just so perfectly done, with her doubts and her guilt etc. Can't wait for more!

Gotta agree with zildjian; you're very good at keeping it from being too ridiculous. I'm loving Gloria.

Just to let you know I am really enjoying this. You''ve got a good story going on here and I really like the way you write Billie and Adrienne. Often I don't like stories about their relationship but yours is somehow both tasteful and believable. I'm looking forward to an update! :)

Aww Billie and Gloria's conversation is so natural. It made me smile :) I can't wait until I find out her proper story. I love this so much. Can't wait for the next part :D

Rape your virgin ears. Hahaha, that's great:)

I still love this story a lot! I just ran out of adjectives to describe my love. :/ haha.

i'm finally all caught up to this story and i'm really really enjoying it! i wish i could write like you. you're very talented :)

can't wait for the next chapter =)

Good story :)

Yay, update!

Oh. I first thought they're having sex, everything must be fine and then by the end of it I was all =[ because its clearly not ok and I want it to be lol. Adie better not start getting a crush hmph!

I feel bad for Billie. *cuddles Billie*

I have a bad feeling now =(

Oof poor Billie and Adie. This is turning out to be quite sad in terms of their relationship :(

oooh and how miss robinson of adie haha.

1) Thanks! I will! Just waiting for my mom to get off work and get me...
2) Thanks for giving me a shout out in your author's notes. =D That was a lovely surprise.

ooooh...Adrienne better not cheat. D< Lmfao. Nice chapter, can't wait for the next. :D

DUDE, you have fun too! It'll be awesome as hell!

Kyra:

That was such an adorable chapter! I feel psychic now.

No, but really, you did an excellent job. Just the way the whole scene came out was perfect and very easy to imagine. You've got a way with words.

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Ah, the concert! Which show are you going to? I'm going to be at the Vegas show this Friday...I'm so nervous and anxious and just...yeah. I can't wait to see them.

Los Angeles on the 25th.
Last U.S. show

hold on.... they cant just kiss each other!!! They're twins!!!!

That was unexpected. You always manage to surprise me x]