Fragmented. - Comments

IT'S FRICKEN' CHRISTIAN!!
I'm telling you!!!
It HAS to be Christian!!!
Oh, no....more fighting....not good...

Loved it :)

Hmmm.... I may have an idea for who their first child can be... Not sure, though... Hmm..

NOO STOP FIGHTING! D: Billie and Adie need to be happy and love each other. :( Fighting isn't cool.

Omg, just caught up. Started with first of the series on Friday and finished this last part of the series today. Update soon? Love it!!!!

ooooooh don't say things like that!
update sooooon please ^^

ARGH! DON'T DO THIS TO ME!!!
...I hope she's either BOTH of theirs or not either of theirs AT ALL....because if she's one and not the others, that would just cause another fight and even more heartbreak...

Somehow, I knew you were gonna end it without letting us know the results...haha!
Update ASAP!!
I have to know what happens!!!

It would make a little bit of sense if it was Adies and not Billies....but not the other way around.

Ooh, what if she turned out to be Adrienne and Mike's? Because they shebanged around the same time. ;D

.......:O
Damn cliffhangers.
They make me want to rip my hair out.

And SHIT. Now I'm all anxious.
:(

Baha, more soon?

"Were you good while I was gone?" He looked at them. "Your mom says you were horrible and you should be beaten." <- rofl.

Okay, this is all too exciting.
But, I bet she's not their daughter.
Even though I really think she is.
Because Christian has to fit somewhere in this picture, right?
Unless they WERE brother and sister...
AND TWINS?!?

Okay, that might be a bit a head of myself.
But I see it as plausible.

More soon. :)

Okay, I changed my mind! I think they THINK it's her, but in all actuality, it's Christian. Because he's nowhere to be found...I know that doesn't really make any sense, but I just think that it's too obvious for Gloria to be their child...I might be over-analyzing all of this haha...but I have this weird feeling that they're going to get the test done and it's not going to be her. And she and Christian came from the same place and...aren't they the same age? So it could be him...and he acts pretty obnoxious like Billie...

Okay, I'll shut up now :D

OMG, we all knew this was coming. :) So glad that it is known to the main characters that their daughter has been under their noses this whole time. Can't wait fot the next update! :)

YES. CALLED IT.
Granted, it is kind of weird that she has a small crush on Billie now...
And that they slept with his arm around her and shit.
But, maybe it could just be brushed off as subconscious father/daughter love. :)

That was fantastic, and I can't wait for more. :)

ps- I screamed a little bit when I heard Billie was playing St. Jimmy :( I wanna seeeeeeeeeee.

I KNEW IT!!!
CALLED IT!!!
But, it IS a little weird how their own daughter has a slight crush on Billie...

Talk about a cliffhanger! Great update!

Love it. Great cliffhanger :)

:( Billie, don't do anything weird.
Please.
She might be your daughter.
And that'd be weird as FUCK.

Aww, Christian. :(
At least we know where he is/ might be for a while now.
He'll come back soonish, right?

Update when you can, I'll be patient. :)

Awww...)':

AHHH! I'm trying my very best to be patient xD