An update! A flipping update! Wish I could get what Ryan meant with Brendon as his favourite. Psh xD Okay, that makes no sense... I think. Whatever. By the way, love the chapter :)
I've missed this so much it isn't funny. I'm glad Ryan and Brendon finally have something together, but it kind of pisses me off that Ryan won't even talk about it. He wouldn't be doing it if he didn't want it, at least a little bit, right?
and now I'm talking like this actually happened. It's okay though, right?
Well, that was amazing, incredible! You left my jaw dropped to the floor, . I hope you'd update this sooner because I'm mentally fidgeting. I truly am excited.
I've been lurkin' for a while, but I can't help but comment on this. fantastic job, and extra points for using the word "whisky" It's one of my favorites (: I applaud you, and I can't wait for more (:
I remember what happened now; I was reading this one day when my computer started acting really stupid and I had to restart and install updates so I stopped reading, and when I looked on my subscription page a few minutes ago, I realized I never finished the chapter. I was seriously all 'D:'
^ Making Brendon stereotypical is a character choice on my part actually. Things that my characters think or believe aren't what I think or believe most of the time..
Well, first things first. Just a couple minor details I picked up on through out the story. Okay... WE DO NOT HAVE FUCKING BAD TEETH! AMERICANS JUST SPEND LOADS MORE ON THEIR TEETH! I'M GOING TO MAKE ALL THE PEOPLE IN MY STORY FAT AND IGNORANT JUST TO SPITE THIS NOW!! CHECK OUT MY STEREOTYPES, SUCKER!!!
And also, I don't think we ever used the dime here, but that's not very important.
Buuuut, oh my god, thank you for a story with an actual plot! All you get is just random events in no particular order or they lose the whole point iof it after the first few chapters, but this stays on track and it's very well-written.
I finally got caught up reading everything! :D And it's still amazing. I really wanna know what's going to happen next. I'm still mad that Ryan kicked Brendon outta the house. >.> Poor Brendon... I really like this anyway.
I really wish I could hug Brendon and slap Ryan and force feed him some penis and then maybe he'd get the fact that IT ISN'T THAT BAD. Sorry for the slight potty mouth, but I just had to. I love this, update soon?
I don't think I could possibly ever sum it up as well as siskybusiness; did up there, so I won't try to. So, take everything she put, and add this: <3.
I really wish it was possible for you to know how much I love this. I just stumbled upon it very recently, and I wasn't going to read it because I'm just not that into Rydon, but I decided to give it a shot, and I'm so glad I did.
This is absolutely amazing. I love the way you portray Brendon's struggles, and how now that he's made this decision, he has to start all over. And I love how you show just how amazing things can be, and just how quickly things can go downhill.
This...is just absolutely amazing. I ask you update as soon as possible. I'll be a frequent reader / commenter.