Take Me Dancing. - Comments

it's so sad how their relationship just died like that.
:(

i hope the next chapter will be happy.

i loveeee this.
it's got me on the edge of my seat, what the hell happened to her and why is garrett being blamed! ARGH.

oh no!
He can't leave her like that.
Noooo.
:(

even though you thought it was lacking, i didn't. i think it displayed the switch in roles that garrett and john have in allison's life. garrett is clearly jealous and that's just not gonna do especially with the confusion that alli's currently dealing with. i hope they fix it soon.

Part of me(no pun intended, hahaa) wants John and her to get together, just because they're so cute together, but I know this is a Garrett story, and that this won't happen. Lol. But damn . . . that fight between her and Garrett was intense. Seriously, I had tears in my eyes. I have no clue what to expect next!
Aweee! How was the concert?! (;

O.O
......

awwwwww

omgomgomgggg you're gonna make me crrryy.

& luckyyy you went to take action? my date was sold out D: but i wanted to see rocket again badlyyy. how was it?

I really love this story :)
And am totally so creepy I'm pretending I'm Allison xD
Because I can.

I think you're pretty good at confusing the hell out of me :)
Not really confusing, though, just good at not letting on what's coming next.
I'm not too happy with Garrett now, even though I have some suspicions that Garrett's maybe in like with Allison, but I'm warming up to John a bit. I hope that Allison doesn't end up in the hospital because of Garrett, whether it would be directly or indirectly his fault :(

Great chapter, bro!
It was really good.
I honestly don't have a clue as to what's gonna happen next, but I'm
thinking that she might go to NYU since she said that she wanted to "take care of herself".
But I'm probably wrong.
Haha, update soon!!
<3

:) I really like this story.
I just want to keep reading.

Oh wow...John's the cutest freakin' thing in the entire world.
He's so good to her.
Gosh, I'm so confused... XD
I have no theories, at all.
Damn it, you mastermind (;

<3

LOVE LOVE. MORE MORE :D

Allison is gonna drive off, to go wherever. Then she's gonna get into a car crash or something, and Garrett's gonna think that it's his fault.

oh, and John is adorable. I loved the way you described him in the truck.

A part of me is wondering if she does like Garrett, but just won't admit it to herself. But, I don't really know. And, I love that John was there, just looking so adorable - well, in my head, he looked pretty damn adorable sitting in that truck! Hahaa. I have no clue as to what's going to happen next, but I can't wait to find out! (:

. His head was leaned back against the headrest, soft snores falling from his wide, open mouth. His eyes were hidden behind the pair of Ray-Bans perched upon the bridge of his nose, his hands clutching onto a bag of Goldfish Crackers, some of the small, orange fish scattered across his lap and the floor. She could see on the seat next to him a pile of CDs, placed next to a saran-wrapped plate of chocolate chip cookies.
-haha awh

“I guess I just wanted to check up on you, you were pretty upset when you left my house, and I was—I am, worried.”
-awh

And even though John had no idea what she was thinking or what her next move would be, he wasn’t blind enough to not see the tears forming in her eyes. Pushing the plate aside, John pulled Allison toward him, cradling her in his lap while her own arms wound around his neck. She buried her head into the crook of his neck, taking in a deep breath, blowing it out, her hot breath causing a shiver to run up John’s spine.
-awh

As much as she could feel the tears that begged to be let free, to fall down her face in a stream of water and mascara that displayed all the disappointment and hurt she had been keeping inside, Allison would not cry. She was sick of being taken care of, sick of having to have other people wipe away her tears or bandage up her broken heart, this time, Allison was going to take care of herself.
-awh

She would have to learn to live without Garrett some day, anyways.
-kdjafks€

Happy Birthday! :)

Garrett's being so weird.

Makes me smile,
so much, but it's also a little
upsettingly sad.

By the way, Happy Birthday!
(belated)

Allison wanted him to embrace her, to tell her that, of course, he could never be replaced, and that obviously, she could never be replaced, either. Instead, she received a stiff nod, and a forced “Yeah,” before he turned quickly on his heel and retreated up the steps.
-aaaaawh. :(

Agh. I was sort of hoping for Garrett to say more than what he did. I mean, he can't expect her to put her dreams on hold for him. Shit's gunna hit the fan? Oh, goodness. I can't wait to read that part! Lol.

I made two major resolutions for myself this year: 1)To be more healthy and conscious of what I eat and 2) Get comfortable in my own skin and learn to walk with my head high.